Here, Bungie, this random fan fiction had more story and purpose than the entire campaign you wrote for us. Don't you really feel like you could have done better? A lot better... I never brought up my issue with the storyline before, since I was assuming a lot of effort was put into online gameplay and there wasn't enough time for a large story, but seeing this very small fan fiction and how great of an insight it is on a possible story, how much work was a good story for you really? I actually hope the writers at Bungie see this and think it over.