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Editado por dragonsfollwer: 8/5/2014 2:07:02 PM
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Hunters creed

Ok so I haven't seen one if these for the hunter YET ( if there is one please link). So I wrote one to see if anyone likes it. I am a Hunter. Many think me a "bandit" others an outlaw, my enemies think me death. I eagerly stalk the battle fields destroying agents of darkness from any range. Striking unseen from the very shadows in which our enemies hide I will send them back to where they came. My blade shall bite deep, my mark shall be true. Steady and strong the Titans are our shields, defending those unable to defend themselves. Cryptic and wise the Warlocks are our knowledge bearers, providing insight into the secrets of the light. As a hunter I am the arrow that pierces into the heart of the darkness, and the blade which cuts it down. I am a Hunter, but WE are Guardians. [b]revision two[/b] [b][/b]

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  • Editado por Darkjynxer: 11/12/2014 1:30:19 AM
    "I eagerly stalk the battle fields destroying agents of darkness from any range." This part just sounds a little well stupid Try something like "I stalk the battle fields destroying agents of darkness with bullet and blade" "defending those unable to defend themselves." This makes them sound more Robin Hood then Crusader of Light. Why not just get rid of it. Finally please change "knowledge bearers" to something else, anything else.

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