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Yep, I saw that one coming from a mile away.
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Its too many worddssss.
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Editado por Mr SexBot: 11/26/2013 5:17:57 AMIt's a story, there's a point to all those words. They're supposed to be entertaining.
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I read it now and... What the hell?!
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Editado por Mr SexBot: 11/26/2013 5:30:44 AMI felt like writing an adventure story, so I just came up with a random idea and just wrote as I went. I'm breaking it up into parts depending on peoples reactions to it, originally I was going to make it one giant thread but I decided multiple smaller threads would be better. Also it would allow to take feedback and refine my ideas. Anyway, is that a good "what the hell?!" or a bad one, and if it's bad what were you issues with my story?
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The giant hat leader getting killed by a fly was anticlimactic.
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I know, that's kinda the reason I threw it in there. It was more for comedy and less for climax
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