Long Text Please Fans of Bungie Read. If you don't have a taste for a read or just don't want to deal with a wall of text. After rereading my passage I have made a shortened version of it at the bottom. Hello everybody I a Ryan X-Zavier Hunter-Ray (Ratiin Tome) and I would like someone to notice this message. Destiny is going to be a mind blowing game and it already has me and all my friends bouncing off the walls. I have loved Bungie every since I could spell the word and Enjoyed playing Games Like Halo and Marathon. Unfortunately I couldn't play the other games that I heard so much about because of money issues or like Oni It being on PS instead of XB. Now the part I wish to let everyone know is that I have been inspired by Bungie to make my own Humanity vs. Aliens story. So For about 5 years now I have been making interesting Characters such as Knalxz, Nayr, and Makupa. What thing that a friend of mine pointed out was that the story seemed to be like Destiny. (Him not knowing that I have been making this story for around 5 years) said that if you put something out this close to something like Destiny it just won't be looked on as a good story but a rip off. Well I argued with him but came to see that what he said is true in fact. That it wouldn't but after trying to gather as much of the story of Destiny as I can. Information and lore. (Not Much so far.) But what I have already written is a possibility of something being a story explaining how the Golden Age of Humanity failed/ Died out. I have already made aliens and looking at the Fallen they move just how I imagined them to move. but the aliens known as the Shig'Rokia are a canine species. Others such as the Geovashians and the Purge, The Sentient (a race of Rampant Robots who of course laugh at mortal life and seek to destroy it even at times making fun of us as dressing in our dead's flesh and charging into battle screaming AH! I'm human don't shoot me friends I'm one of you.) and the Universal plague all play well into the Cabal, Hive and the Vex But All I am saying is please Bungie and the great fans of Bungie consider this as a possibly for a prequel explain the past during the Golden age. Even a species I have made known as Talions defend us humans from the dangers of the universe. I don't ask for any money just to at least see someone notice his story and maybe help me with my story writing. I haven't even graduated from High School yet and I know I have much to learn and I hope to go on and make what I call Calamity into a full on Book series some day but now seeing destiny I hope to turn it into the Story of How the Golden Age feel. Hopefully with their approval I could make this dream come true. What I am asking above can't really be put into words but all I can say for sure is I have a story that have been in the making for almost 5 years and it resembles Bungie's new story Destiny. All I want is to see if anyone from Bungie would consider putting my story into the lore of Destiny. I don't want any money all I want is to see probably my most favorite Company take in my story and use it as it was meant to be a good story that is great for readers. I have always wanted to make a video game story or just write stories in general. That is my passion I just want something that I wrote a few years ago that somewhat turned out like Destiny to be used as the Description of the Story of how the golden age fell. If it does good then tears of joy will fall from my eyes. If it doesn't get noticed I hope that you all will see a Book on the shelves or in some online audio book named Calamity and decide to take a look into it. Thanks you for any kind of viewing of this page. Even if it is just to trash it. Either way if you are here you are a fan of Bungie and I have nothing against you unless you are someone who doesn't like Destiny and is doing whatever you can to destroy its rep then. O.o why would you do that is my only question. But have a good day.