I used a false name, btw. Anyways, so I recently composed a theme for a fictional character I made up. It's unfinished, I plan to add a couple solos and at least three more instruments, but before I do that..... Any comments, critiques, suggestions? I'm a really newbie composer, and have subpar knowledge of music theory, so bare with me. Edit 1: Added Bb clarinet, drums, and cymbals. Added 2 minutes onto total time. Plans - Raising and lowering registers for certain parts, making it sound less mushed together with indiscernible parts at times. Want to make the melody stand out more. Also planning to add/edit more dynamics. Edit 2: Added introduction thingy, added a countermelody to the clarinet solo at measure 45, moved various notes/registers around a bit.