I watched it, all of it. So here's my goods and bads, just constructive criticism to help in the future!
Goods: it's an overall great idea, I enjoyed the fact that it showed off some scenery/backgrounds that most people don't take time to look at and enjoy. Also the coordination was pretty good amongst the players and their actions. Using the hammer was a cool way to transition. I do see the amount of time and work put into this video, it shows between all the different locations you went to.
Bads: the main thing is although the hammer transition was cool, I didn't like the fact that you had to look at the ground or a wall each time(I'm thinking of different ways to transition). The movement got slow at some points, most notably in the tunnel with the fan.
This next one is my personal preference so take it how you will, but I would have liked a bit less of the caves/small areas and more of the open areas and backgrounds outside the maps. I enjoy the artwork and it shows off more of Destiny that way.
Honestly it was good, don't let the toxic people out there make you think otherwise. I hope maybe this helps a bit for your next videos.
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It helps alot Actually! I'm always looking for ways I can improve! Thank you! 😊
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Not a problem! I like to help as much as I can. Feel free to keep in touch if you want ideas or opinions.
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Will do!