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Editado por NinjaTurtwig:
5/8/2016 8:22:07 PM
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I drew Hawkmoon
Constructive criticism is welcomed. I think I rushed it because I only spent about 3 hours on it. The feathers were especially rushed.
Edit: Thanks everyone for the advice I'll make it look nicer after I learn how to shade.
Since most people seem to like the drawing, I think I'll draw another gun, maybe Patience and Time. Thanks for all of the positive replies!
English
#Destiny
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I think the finger cutouts on the grip should be a little more defined. Other than that, it's great!
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I saw that there were 299 comments and I just had to make it 300. [i]very[/i] nice work man!
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2 RespuestasThe talon on the bottom could be curved back a little more. It realllly good though I would like to screenshot it if that is cool with you.
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Pretty good. The barrel should be rifled though in my opinion.
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That's fantastic
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Nice work
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Nice job man
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Looks wicked, nice work.
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Solid, keep it up man.
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Artist here, thought I should give you some "constructive criticism" like you said. The grip looked like it was badly done and flawed the drawing. If you want to draw a grip like that, try to keep the circles a bit more neat. The shading was also a bit odd, shading is a skill that you need to master if you plan on drawing things other than guns. It's important for you to work on that, try to imagine as if there's a source of light coming from a corner of the page. Use that as a guide for your shading and shadows. The farther from your light, the darker. I think you did well on the proportioning though, it was done nicely! :) Just some personal opinion, I like using a pen if I'm drawing weapons, I recommend you to try it. I also thought was a bit odd that a talented drawer could have bad hand writing. Good work though, keep it up! :D
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1 RespuestaFake, how could you drew this in the future?
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4 RespuestasIt's amazing how well you can draw, yet how terrible your hand writing is. I'm certainly not one to speak though, as I have worse hand writing than you. A wise man once said "my hand writing is bad because my hand cannot keep up with the speed that my brain is moving" Take it as you wish
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6 RespuestasDrawing guns at school are we? Call the cops! He's a terrorist! We have your name, buddy. Pal. It's only a matter of time.
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Really nice ^.^ the chamber could be a little clearer other than that well done c:
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The angle in which the handle meets the barrel could be a little sharper and the end where the bullet fires from is the wrong shape. But its 1000 times better than anything i could draw
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Good start, you just need practice. Also don't put your name on the Internet. It's weird.
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[quote]Constructive criticism is welcomed. I think I rushed it because I only spent about 3 hours on it. The feathers were especially rushed. Edit: Thanks everyone for the advice I'll make it look nicer after I learn how to shade. Since most people seem to like the drawing, I think I'll draw another gun, maybe Patience and Time. Thanks for all of the positive replies![/quote]looks good. Draw vision of confluence next
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Pretty neat! [b][][][][/b]
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1 Respuestavery nice, do a gjally next :D
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Nice job
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Very nice!
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Wonderful! Did you free hand this?
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beautiful drawing man
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Really nice drawing. The only thing I would say is try to make the lines of the feathers a little thinner so they don't stand out so much.
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1 RespuestaEditado por BigHotGayDad: 5/9/2016 2:01:00 PMNever mind I was thinking eyasluna sorry ignore this comment
