Jesus Christ this is -blam!-ing bad. I'd love to how great it was,before you "remastered" it
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Edited by TheLegend27: 2/7/2017 12:37:47 AMIf you found anything bad in my stories like Bad Writing, Horrible Grammar, Story plot, Plot holes, anything that's bad please tell me whats wrong and tell me how i can make it better and thank you for the feedback i will take it into accounting and try better next time
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Edited by TheLegend27: 2/6/2017 11:13:47 PMBy remastered i meant readable but tell me how can i make it better