Great job! Um, I do recommend you start each paragraph with 3 spaces when they are talking like so...
"Howdy partner!"
And 4 spaces on descriptive text like so...
The man walked in to the bar and sat down.
What this does is more clearly define the paragraphs and it's easier to read.
English
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I prefer the no space technique, while it does define thing more easily, it’s a sort of art style seen in the lore books and the such.