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You enjoy the chapter?
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It's good, but you go a little quick in the story, describe what's going on and not moving things quickly, but ya it's great!
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Just revised chapter 1 now it's a 2 part chapter :) (I added some new stuff in)added a navigation part in the bottom of each thread related to my ff hope you enjoy it
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Thanks :) I'll try to describe it more I was trying not to make it unbearably slow and describing things that didn't help push the story guess I skimped on story details as well
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Thanks for the bump!