I'm not necessarily asking for criticism. I made this in about ten minutes, so I know it isn't going to be good. I just want to know if you think it makes the feelings presented very clear. "Euthanasia" --- Sometimes when we’re alone I just sit there and enjoy your sight I look at every aspect of you, Everything that nobody else would ever recognize You cut your hair in some spots, Maybe because it was out of line You cake on too much make-up To keep the imperfections out of sight When I think of you do I imagine Us making oaths we cannot abide? Or maybe just a helpless victim Waiting for your turn in line I never meant to hurt anyone If you want to know the truth But sometimes I can’t help but think of all The bad things I could do I’ve been hurting all of my life And I would never harm a fly But I can say I -blam!-ing lied When I said I’d be there ‘till I die I know you’ll never forgive me And maybe that I can take But it seems that I can never sleep In any bed I make Now I’m here, we’ve traded place And you’re crawling on the floor Maybe we’re done and we’ve had our wrongs Or maybe just getting bored But one thing is always certain love I could never pull the cord --- Also, if anyone wants to get something off your chest, I'm here to talk. On top of how I'm already feeling, fathers' day is coming up soon and my dad disowned me so I'm feeling pretty shitty.