{{
`${userDetail.user.displayName}${userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode ? `#${standardizeBungieGlobalCode(userDetail.user.cachedBungieGlobalDisplayNameCode)}` : ""}`}}
{{getUserClans()}}
Modificato da HappyLine:
6/18/2016 2:57:12 AM
11
I made a story.
I made a poll a couple months ago for people of the Destiny community to review a little series that I am making with a friend. It's called [u]Destiny: Underground[/u], and I got the idea from a dream I had. So the first time I published it and shared in on the Destiny forums, I was met with slightly positive reviews, but it didn't feel good. The story was confusing, messy, and overall just plain dull. I decided to redo it with my friend, and now it's back to chapter 1. Let me know what you think by answering the poll!
[b]Please grade appropriately and honestly. This information is extremely important to me.[/b]
-
5 RisposteI think it was pretty good. Honestly from what I think of the Vanguard leaders, I feel Ikora and Zavala are a bit swapped but that might just be me. The guardians of the fireteam themselves seem... childish? I guess. That might be the point though. I've just been reading a lot of "mature" books recently, so I've gotten used to more adult characters. Character actions sometimes seem a little forced? Like the Titan I found believable, the warlock wasn't bad, but the Hunter (who seems to be the main character as of now) seemed kind of awkward in a way that wasn't part of his personality. That's really confusing to read, I know, but that's how I would describe it. Do you understand? Either way, I'm interested. And that's the main goal, isn't it?
