JavaScript is required to use Bungie.net

Forum

9/24/2015 10:32:37 PM
1
No, he missed commas in his sentence structure, and there is also one too many commas in "cautious, skilled, players."
English

Lingua:

 

Fate i bravi. Prima di postare date un'occhiata al nostro codice di condotta. Annulla Modifica Crea squadra Invia

  • Modificato da Miofwin: 9/25/2015 12:13:26 PM
    That's an oxford comma. If your job is to proof read university papers and you completed a highest level university course in grammar, you should of recognised that. Now stop getting so triggered by everyone.

    Lingua:

     

    Fate i bravi. Prima di postare date un'occhiata al nostro codice di condotta. Annulla Modifica Crea squadra Invia

  • It is an Oxford comma; I'm saying that you used one too many. It should be "cautious, skilled players." It shouldn't be "cautious, skilled, players." When you put it like that, you're separating your adjectives from the noun you're describing. In this case, the noun is "players." You wouldn't say "Those are some skilled, players." You would take out the comma. When you're listing more than one adjective, you do have to use commas for listing purposes, but the last adjective describing the noun never has a comma after it.

    Lingua:

     

    Fate i bravi. Prima di postare date un'occhiata al nostro codice di condotta. Annulla Modifica Crea squadra Invia

  • Okay. Fair enough.

    Lingua:

     

    Fate i bravi. Prima di postare date un'occhiata al nostro codice di condotta. Annulla Modifica Crea squadra Invia

Non ti è permesso visualizzare questo contenuto.
;
preload icon
preload icon
preload icon