Original: He calls others plebs but capitalises every word and has terrible sentence structure as well as spelling. Okay. When I kill someone with my Hammer of Sol it's because they've just been running around with shotguns. We can't easily kill snipers as they can dodge our hammers easily and so can cautious, skilled, players. Stop being a shotty scrub and you wouldn't get killed as often. Corrected: He calls others plebs but capitalises every word and has terrible sentence structure as well as spelling. Okay. When I kill someone with my Hammer of Sol[b],[/b] it's because they've just been running around with shotguns. We can't easily kill snipers as they can dodge our hammers easily and so can cautious, skilled players. Stop being a shotty scrub[b],[/b] and you wouldn't get killed as often. I bolded the few things you should have put in your sentences. It wasn't terrible, but you shouldn't go criticizing someone else's grammar unless your's is damn perfect.