originally posted in:The Black Garden
Nice! This is the first origin story I've seen that's not set in either the present day (like mine) or way back at the beginning of the Collapse. We definitely need more stories that capture those years after the Collapse, when the Wall had not yet been built & the City was still vulnerable to assault from the ground.
Good stuff, can't wait to see more!
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Thanks man. I had to edit some stuff when Jason Jones revealed more things about the lore lol. I tried to make this as realistic as possible to the actual lore.
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Edited by DJenser: 12/14/2013 6:21:35 PMI know how that goes. I took a slightly different approach on my character's story and kept it somewhat light on the lore, focusing more on the personal/POV side of things. Plus I kept it current because I plan on actually building the character out as my Titan in the game. I may go back and edit a bit more now that I have some more backstory for the game.
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Yeah, everyone will have a different approach. I took this approach to make it easy to imagine it within the universe we've experienced thus far. I added things like the pet tiger and the description of Ceres to allude to the concept art. The name Ceres was chosen for specific reasons as well. Even the foreshadowing of the hunter and warlock crests originating in the necklaces of the two brothers. Also, the name "Nova" alluding to Aenon eventually naming his technique "Nova bomb." All of the little details I made were very intentional.