Woah, the improvement between this one and last one is pretty neat. Brushing was nice, but this one has more color and more depth to it. Idk, i'm not good at critiquing art, but this one seems much more 3d than the last one. And the lines are cleaner and sharper it seems as well. I do like how the sequence between pictures tells a little story. Kinda a boring story, but hey, it's still cool. Good job!