Ah, I see you’ve written another piece on Rogues vs Praxics. I suppose you didn’t see the post, but there’s a fanfic contest that ends at the end of today, and this story fits the prompt. So if you’re interested you can check the contest out and submit this as an entry. https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/256177639/0/0 Okay, my feedback. The big thing that bugged me right at the very beginning was the location: Why the heck are a bunch of self-proclaimed Rogue Lightbearers having a gathering [i]in the City?[/i] It seems like a rather stupid place to gather since they’re calling themselves rogues (plus the cliche of the room being dark might be a little much). But this was well done. It’s a very good representation of the extreme views of the anti-Traveler/Anti-Praxic/Pro-Light+Dark people that rose out of Gambit.