If I can offer some advice, I think you should try editing out the dull bits and including more of the funny moments. People have short attention spans, and don't like waiting for the funny parts for too long. Just something I think might help your channel.
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Thank you first time I have actually got good constructive criticism I really appreciate that and I agree I'm still getting used to my new editing software and I've only done 4 commentary videos so far hopefully they just keep getting better with time ;)
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You're welcome. Just make videos that you would enjoy watching. Good luck, CaptainSteinz. (:
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Thank you pureey ;) hope to see you on my new subscriber list some day