I mean, its philisophical, I guess. But nothing really that deep (if that was your intention) Its enjoyable to read, kinda. So theres that, keep working on it

[quote]Just take a look, A hell that we create, A world filled a single drive, A endless drive, A Lust to Die, Just take a moment, A thought and nothing more, A second of reflection, A question of why, A point that is mute, A question... What’s the point? Why do we inflict this to ourselves? What’s the matter? Why is there a feeling of self doubt? [i]Does anyone truly listen?[/i] [spoiler]Just another Random poem thing, I come up with these when I have a hard time sleeping and are normally based on elements of thought, emotion, and my day. Let me know if they are something you guys are interested in or not[/spoiler][/quote] Awful. [spoiler]don’t give up your day job to pursue poetry[/spoiler]