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Edited by Windom: 3/16/2014 4:49:23 AM
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Critique my short film?

It's 2 minutes long or so, and only my first draft. I had to make a "dream sequence" for Digital Media, but I modeled this more after a nightmare. I'm going to be adding in a lot of stuff like quick flashes of various things that add to the plot, filters, audio distortion, and a lot of other things that will keep it from being as boring as it seems here. [u]Things that are final (please critique me on these)[/u] --The individual shots themselves (panning, tracking, zooming, etc.) --The acting --The general direction of the plot (moving from place to place) [u]Things that I'm going to edit later[/u] --The sound of the dolly moving in the movement shots --The composition as a whole will have a lot more quick, creepy flashes of things --The name (perhaps, I don't know if I'm sticking with it) --The audio in general is going to be overhauled to be smoother, and I might put in a background song with a "radio" effect P.S. I used shitty in-browser video software to make this, on Monday I'll have access to Final Cut Pro.

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