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1/15/2020 8:52:00 PM
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The End: Cut Content

So when I was writing the end of my characters story, there were a lot of ideas that got scrapped for various reasons, mostly due to character limit. Anyway, thought some folks might like it so here's all this nonsense: [spoiler] - Dr Falses SCP Suicide Squad: Originally planned to have him and a couple other folks that had been written as SCPs here to drop into the fight. Cell, Man of Light, Tiger, and Saitonia were on the list. - Tigersfan was going to be infected with NotNil ichor after that stabbing and go all Artorias on Tilman and Loot. - CoolHandLuke and I were collaborating on a story to sort of recap, fill in some blanks in Nils lores, set up my "new" character, and lead up to their final fight. He was super busy tho and to be honest I'm not sure I wanna come back. Might post the vision I wrote later. - Gorlok was going to have a bigger role that eventually would lead to him and the other Vamps switching sides to help the city. - Backseat was knocked out by the Temple bell. That wasn't technically cut content, I just forgot to include it after rewriting that scene. Originally, Dark Tigersfan was going to knock him out. - Acro was going to be at the gate with Giant and Tigersfan doing some blasting. - Liams forces included tanks and stuff that I'd planned to have doing shit in the background. - Giant and Titan were gonna do the Predator Muscle Arm Lock Hand Shake Thing and it woulda been super cool, but I didn't know if anyone would get that old movie reference. - Veggie and Liam doing Star Wars shit together. - Holmes, Watson, and Ring doing more in general. I had a scene with them and the Elves fighting through the city. - NotNil sassing off more, but the act was no longer needed so it dropped it. - Flesh Sculpters big boss body gibbering madness that messed with minds and warped flesh. - A lot more overly dramatic descriptions of things. I have a problem. I love writing about gross ichor and fleshy monsters.[/spoiler] The last things down below in a comment. These nightmares were planned for immediately after Jeff interfered with the teleportation spell. It took up a lot of space and didn't really contribute much to the main plot tho so I cut them out.
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  • Sadly, I never got time to read this story, but cut content is honestly one of my favorite topics! I love hearing about how the developments of a story changed behind the scenes, either getting scrapped completely, or winding up as something totally different than the original concept! I wish I had some neat examples to share, but I’ve rarely posted my writing on here, so it wouldn’t make much sense..

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