Excellent writing I really enjoyed it. But I see that when you referred to "the guardian" accomplishments, you mentionned him slaying Calus, yet the story happens during the beggening of the red war. Just wanted to let you know. Otherwise this was very good and I'm looking forward to chapter 2 !
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I can see your misunderstanding. The text that is in italics is a dream/memory. Laira-2 had a tough time during the Red War. The current timelime is right where Destiny 2 is now.
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Atypical Typo
You're true Gaurdian Angle! - old
Oh my bad then, friend :) I must've misread. -
I appreciate you reading it and its okay! The italics are kind of hard to notice.