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12/31/2015 12:42:50 AM
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That was more gameplay than a montage and there were a lot of bodyshots.
This is the montage our clan recently released
https://youtu.be/NRuNAd1FJn4
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Your honestly can't say shit about our montage when yours is this bad
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No it was not gameplay, it's a montage, I saw your video, looks too blurry to see what's going on and looks copied from another channel but some very good clips in it, take the visual effects out and it's decent
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I would rather watch a pve montage than your montage kid.
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Edited by Fraser: 12/31/2015 2:55:01 AMI just want to give you some constructive criticism for next time. In a montage you want a lot of clips concentrated. I felt like I was watching a regular gameplay because a lot of the time there wasn't really anything happening. My second bit of advice would be to make better transitions. It just seem to cut in some places and a nice fast transition or extra editing or colour correction would have made it more interesting. Thirdly there were way to many bodyshots in there lol. Now I know it sounds like I'm being overly critical, but saying 'nice montage bro' isn't gonna help you at all. I'm merely doing this because I'm trying to give you advice for next time so you can improve it. Once again I'm not trying to hate, I'm just gonna tell you what other people are gonna tell you in as friendly of a way as possible. So just remember: Don't have clips of you walking around, have cleaner cuts, and probably less bodyshots. Edit: Mah Grammar
