I feel the scene with the biscuit can be expanded upon. Here's my contribution. [spoiler] Bio the Baker was my favorite person in the village. Every time I would go to his shop, he would treat me to one of his special pastries. Today when I walked in, he had a surprise in store; in his hand, he held a massive biscuit, easily a foot long. He beckoned me closer, my heart beginning to pound with excitement. Could this be happening? Bio grinned, and told me to open my mouth. It was happening. The greatest day of my life... My breathing quickened as Bio slid his warm, flaky biscuit into my mouth. I closed my eyes and rolled my tongue around the exterior, savoring the buttery taste of his hot, steaming biscuit as it slid in and out of my willing mouth. Bio slowly pushed more of the pastry into me, making me gasp at the pleasure of such a delicious morsel being placed into my body. I wanted it to end, to bite down and swallow all of the pastry's delicious flavor, but at the same time, I wanted to savor its taste for as long as I could. Bio began to speed up his thrusts, the excitement he felt as he watched me eat the biscuit almost equal to my own. The biscuit was large, its round body barely able to fit inside my mouth, but to spill any bit of this delicious treat would be inexcusable. The pastry slid further in, my gag reflex almost activating as it hit the back of my throat. "Please Bio, let me swallow..." I moaned through the mouthful of delicious pastry. His only response was to roll the pastry in my mouth, making me gasp as the full flavor of the treat hit me again. I couldn't stand it anymore; I grabbed the pastry from Bio's hand and took my first bite, the cream filling bursting into my mouth and sliding down my throat to join the now swallowed pastry. I finished the rest of the treat, without spilling a single drop or crumb, the flavors washing over me and filling me with warmth. "Did you enjoy it?" Bio asked, his wide grin already expecting the answer I'd give. I breathed back, "That was the greatest experience of my life. Do you have some more?" The grin became wider, and I felt myself growing excited once more as the answer was made clear. "I have all the biscuits in the world. Come in the kitchen and I'll give you some more..."[/spoiler]