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8/14/2019 3:27:22 PM
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Critique my concept art ?
I know I am not the best, any tips and suggestions, concept ideas will be very much appreciated 😄
Aspiring video game concept art https://imgur.com/gallery/WjI0Ra7
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2 RisposteIt's pretty cool, Though I saw your other post about this being for a video game. I don't know how well it would fit in a game, but I could definitely see it being in a short film or animation But all that being said... It seems a little generic in design, I don't see a whole lotta detail. Want inspiration? You should read the book of Revalation. There are so many creatures and thier descriptions are awesome. I plan on giving my shot on some of em soon. You have a lot of potential, keep up the good work mate!
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You need more angles and poses. A profile view is a necessity, as are pictures of smaller details of their anatomy(such as what their mouths/eyes/feet or hands look like.) What I do for a concept of a creature is a male and female in a simple action pose, such as waving, standing with/on an object, leaning against a wall, etc... It will help you to better understand how the creature would move, giving it character and showing you, potentially, what should be changed.
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A solid 5/7
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I like them, but I think the first one looks a bit unnatural. It doesn't have any sort of counterbalance to it.
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oooo 'tis snazzy
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Pretty good. I like it.
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1 RispondiIt looks like a chicken wolf... [spoiler]I approve.[/spoiler]
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2 RisposteArchaeopteryx, a bird-like dinosaur, archaeopteryx, with a mouth full of teeth, archaeopteryx...
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I like it 0-0
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2 RisposteVery nice 👍 Not sure what to critique tho... Keep up the good draws!
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1 RispondiHey man, this is a hell of a lot better than I can do. I wouldn't out it in a portfolio just yet but I think you have the talent there. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll become a great artist.
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