originally posted in:The Black Garden
The plot thickens. Who is this man that knows Nora seemingly so well? The Cabal's "alliance" in this chapter leaves me curious about their cooperative beginnings and goals. Excellent chapter. The suspense, and the tension especially, is rising.
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As I told Midas; perhaps this man is another ghost from Nora's past, maybe he's a soldier like Dread or maybe his exact opposite, an Anti-Dread if you will (which would make him what Hope)? Of course the man could be playing the Cabal for fools or vice versa and they are each using the other to further an agenda, but what's the agenda is the question is it not?
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All good points. I will take these ideas with a grain of salt. It is an effective strategy to mislead your readers in a story. I do believe that each party's own interests are in mind and they don't fully trust each other. I imagine many secrets are kept between them. Yes, Hope, haha.
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Good idea.