An ancient power designed to create
Equally capable to immolate
Considered evil, with dangerous intention
Is humanity's greatest building invention
Incased in black red seeps in veins
Tendrils bleed out upon terrains
With mysterious might, it will consume
To replace with beauty made by loom
So see to it that you'll never forget
Or see that you will forever regret:
What you see is not infection:
For what it gives, is perfection
English
#Destiny
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1 ReplyUmm... 2/10. Just kinda lame and not really fluid at all. It reads like a bucking bronco.
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1 Reply[i]~enhance replicate consume candy~[/i]
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Edited by Milk: 11/3/2016 10:00:04 PMSIVA. Wouldn't wanna be ya. ... I'm gonna leave now.[b][/b]
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Welcome to trials I'm here to DoS Getting my items feeling like a boss Don't look me up, don't look at my kd I screw around that's why it's a .3
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3 RepliesYou think the siva is your ally but it is not so You merely adopted the siva, it's darkness you do not know I was raised in the siva corrupted.. mechanical I was molded by the siva it's power dwels within me.... insurmountable
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Roses are red. Siva is red. Some emblems and shaders are red too. Can't wait for Red Dead Redemption 2.
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4 RepliesSo much cringe in one post.. please
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should have said "to replace with beauty, made with doom"
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SIVA is a threat./An entity that consumes./You are in danger!
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14 RepliesEdited by Acris: 11/2/2016 9:50:57 PMI don't see why we had to destroy siva, I think we could have harnessed it, given it direction to fight or build for humanity
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The fact that a poem need not rhyme, Should in itself be a crime, For rhyme in a poem, it is you see, Like being the only male in a massive orgy. Genius, I know.
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7 RepliesWhy did SIVA... Never perfect itself... *Mind blown*
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Oh, SIVA You consumed and enhanced and replicated... The iron lords... And SIVA The splicers pillaged and bestowed and distorted... Themselves So, SIVA Stop being such a nano-terror, nuisance DIVA [spoiler]i lost interest too soon, sorry guys [/spoiler]
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Twizzlers are red Striker Titans Juggernaut shield is blue Nightfall is Bond brothers With solar burn too
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2 RepliesAm I the perfection refered to on the last line? If so, great poem! If not... [spoiler]Pain[/spoiler]
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1 ReplyThe roses are red SIVA is mostly red too Illuminati
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Damn, nicely done.
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Holy wow
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Expected to see something gay but that was actually pretty good
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Last part is just amazing. This is almost grimoire worthy.
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Hey, that's pretty good
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Well written.
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I was expecting cringe but this is legit good. Nice job
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Good job! Never seen anybody do Destiny poetry before. It's good to have art from different mediums.
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Jesus Christ....
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