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My Destiny Part 4
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2 RespuestasYay, I've caught back up :) When do you plan to release the next chapter?
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3 RespuestasThe title says (My Destiny Part 3) Just to let you know. I know its part 4 just the title of the doc is misleading.
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1 RespuestaGreat read, as always can't wait for the next read. still some minor spelling errors though, but nothing that isn't too bad.
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1 Respuestanot gonna lie when i got to the kidnapping scientist part this is what i immediately thought of (0:11) good job
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2 Respuestaswhere can I find the first three?
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5 RespuestasAnother great work. Your stories are getting better and better as they come out :) I'm really excited for the next part, especially with the cliff-hanger ending. NOTE: One thing I've noticed in all of your writings though is the word "our" is switched to "out". It's probably your autocorrect or something, but I can't know for sure.
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And once again you've outdone your self Aloki. Loved the ending.
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awesome. reading now!
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3 RespuestasAloki you truly can captivate a read I could not stop reading until I was done with the entire chapter! This is another amazing part to your epic story! Cannot wait for the rest that I know will be amazing! However, as some constructive criticism you miss typed some words in this chapter but it didn't take away from the story, they were easily understandable. Keep up the great work!
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1 RespuestaCan someone reply to me with a link to Part 1?
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1 RespuestaI cant wait to read this tonight! I'll post my first chapter in about a week :)
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hhhmmmm
