I like your creativity and the way you told this story, but in afraid some things need to be straightened out concerning the accuracy of this idea. So the Darkness hasn't come over to our realm and doesn't hav physical form, so literally cannot kill us. The memory part with the Ghost is interesting, and I like how his Light weakened as he came to doubt the Light, but how can he hav and receive the memories of Guardians? Osiris and Eris both work with the Queen, so I wouldn't really call those two different paths. Osiris doesn't hav the power of the Sun, he's just a Warlock with exceptional Light, and Eris doesn't hav the power of the night (although she did pick up on some Hive spells), she just doesn't hav very much Light left and has been changed by exposure to Darkness. And I doubt they'd just go down easy in a fight, if they even decided not to just ditch you. The corrupted with Darkness part was interesting for the Necro-Guardians, and Dredgen Yor seems to be proof that a Guardian tainted with Darkness can be revived as long as they hav a little Light left. And this is a big one; Guardians can make choices. They don't hav to fight the Darkness or defend people or anything, it's just the path most choose because the Traveler tries to revive good people. In the Dark Age when the Risen (Guardians) first started to appear, some became Warlords and oppressed other people and others just struck out alone and didn't help anyone but themselves. The concept that Necro-Guardians "have a choice" is a poor one because the normal Guardians also have a choice. But Guardians and Ghosts can't be Taken because they are beings of Light, so the part where they were covered with Taken goo was inaccurate. Also, Oryx is perma-dead, so couldn't hav been present with the others. And the Hive are all hellbent on destroying the Traveler, so the idea of having them be conspirators with the Traveler isn't good. And why would the Guardian fight Rasputin for the Traveler after it just told him that it was evil and had killed its Ghost. Rasputin is an AI, not a psychic, he can't get in your head and you can't fight him there. Again, the Hive wouldn't side with the Traveler, and they definitely wouldn't side with you. Plus, how could the Worms keep the Traveler from controlling you if your story was accurate and the Traveler could just take away their power?

Holy unscalable wall of text, Batman!

TL;DR for people who like their sanity intact: It's pure, unsalvageable nonsense. Now run along and spend your time on something better.

Sorry dear, it is poorly written with no paragraphs. Try clean it up and maybe it can be taken seriously

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I know how to improve it! Give this unholy wall of text some structure. I'm betting there are probably grammatical errors as well, but I'm not reading...that.

Who read all that?

[spoiler] PLEASE DON"T HATE ONE IT JUST GIVE OPNIOINS TO IMPROVE IT -That title tho- [/spoiler]

Oh for shits sake... THE TRAVELER IS NOT EVIL

FIXED FOR EASIER READING [quote]AN IDEA ABOUT DESTINY 2 : SO THE STORY GOES LIKE THIS: The idea is we are sent to a mission with our current guardians , BUT in the mission we encounter DARKNESS itself who kills our body but we send our ghost off to locate another guardian. In this way we can see our guardian as well . Moving on , the ghost becomes traumatised and heads back to tower, For the next few missions, we take control of our GHOST. The ghost remembers all we have accomplished but in these memories he realizes how alone he is now? He just starts losing it , his light starts to fade away until one day a vision comes to him. The vision shows him an abandoned place . It radiates with traveler light (BUT this light can only be detected by the speaker and the ghosts ) The ghost locates the place to be OLD chicago. Around that time, Cayde-6 announces a delivery being made to OLD Chicago. The ghost decides to sneak onto the cargo ship. He arrives there . After a bit of searching , he finds the place. The ghost is burnt into ashes but it's light is kept intact. The ghost can see it's husk. He looks around for the source for his disintregation , he locates it to a rift burning with immense light. The ghost radiates with joy as he realizes that the rift is created by the Traveller and The ghost realises it it the Traveller standing before him. He sees his husk take a new shape in front of him. He looks up to Traveller and whispers "father, why?" to which the traveller says slowly " You'll need it ...my son" The ghost with it's new shell goes on. It now picks an even stranger signal emanating from the facility. In there he encounters A necro-guardian. The ghost knew about these. These guardians had powers of the ordinary guardians , But they had another quality that others did not. They had the choice to defy their reason of creation (TO SERVE THE TRAVELLER) For this purpose, these guardians were locked away. The rift opens and the Traveller says to ghost to pick one for it trusts his decision. The ghost being the fool it is, picks one . Instantly the ghost is seared upon with new memories. Armies marching, fallen upon fallen dying. The ghost realizes his mistake. He had awoken an even worse abomination. This particular necro-guardian he awoke was tainted with darkness. The ghost grows angry and tries to kill the guardian, But he meets it's eyes and remembers us for they are like our old guardian. The ghost revives the guardian completely, and they set course back but are stopped by two hooded figures. One burns bright like the sun and the other is like the blackest of the night. The figures reveal themselves to be Eris Morn And Osiris. they both offer us a path. (Here we have two options) OPTION A: Choose Eris and gain power of the night and join Eris and the Queen in fighting against The Darkness. OPTION B: Join Osiris and gain power of the sun and join Osiris and his fellow being to fight the Vex. (Here I thought to add a third option) We decide to kill them both thus choosing neither of these options. As soon we reject these options,we suddenly fall down . Our chest hurts with immense pain . We look down and we see the pitch black of the Darkness creeping upon our bodies (NOT THE TAKEN GOO , PURE -blam!-ING DARKNESS) the ghost tries to cure us but it also becomes infected. But we are a special guardian, we resist it and embrace it. In the end we emerge as a new type of guardian entirely. Neither light or dark , but a mixture of both. we suddenly sense some thing and the next thing we feel is something immense pulling us. We are now face to face with Darkness, looking around we can see the Worm gods, ORYX, his sisters and The Darkness' other subordinates. Here we fall into despair for what we see racks us beyond imagination. We see the traveller . An emotional convo ensues w/ our ghost and the Traveller . At the end , the traveller kills the ghost with the words " I am sorry , but it's better that you don't see what happens next" The traveller then informs us of it's real motive was to create the fake cover up of DARKNESS , in order to gain allegiance of mankind for it hoped to gain something from them . The Traveller then informs us that he wants us to kill Rasputin. Why? he won't tell. Anyway, we go and kill Rasputin . Rasputin invades our mind and in there we defeat it but in there we find out Traveller's true motives and the city's. The true motive was not to save humanity but to to enslave it. In what posed to be the perfect "BE A HERO AND HAVE FREEDOM" scenario, the traveller had fooled everyone using his ghosts and speaker that he cared about everyone. Our guardian grows in rage and vows to kill the speaker . NOTE : I SAID SPEAKER CUZ TRAVELLER IS REALLY POWERFULL AND WE ARE NOT FIT TO KILL IT YET. Anyway moving on, we now make oyrx and his subordinates defect from the Traveller. We use the worms to stop traveller from gaining influence over us . We raid the tower and kill the speaker. AND the story ends with Saladin and The Vanguard and Shaxx being gathered in a bunch and brought in front of us. the last thing the camera shows us approaching them , with darkness in our hand , cayde calls us " DARK LORD....." " Got a nice ring to it" we say. The last thing we hear is screams . The credits roll and we see ourselves walk out of the tower accompanied by our army [/quote]

All this dark seems a little extreme.