Been reading all of your stories faithfully, even the ones on Tumblr. You sir, are a talent to behold! Keep putting Bungie to shame!
There's also a change I think you should make. Andal is speaking, saying "where we should focus our attention on is the wall". I think it should read, "is on the wall"
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Thanks a lot, I really appreciate the support! And thanks for the tip, I'll change it!