It was another day in the Tower, full of Christmas cheer.
Even Master Rahool lightened up as Christmas grew near.
And as snowflakes began to drift down from the sky..
The Traveler, for once, didn't seem about to die.
But all was not well for our Guardian crew..
As down from the sky, the Darkness it flew!
"Crota's power, what do we do!?"
Eris yelled, full fear. "If we don't stop Him Christmas is doomed!"
A band of Guardians raised arms and got ready.
As bullets aplenty rained very heavy.
But Crota's plan a success it had been.
He stole every present, decoration, and small Christmas tree pin!
The Tower in shambles, a shadow loomed over them all.
Christmas was ruined, for Crota could not fall!
But the Guardians stood strong, heroes its true.
"People!" One said. "We'll bring Christmas back to you!
Crota strikes fear into the heart of our people!
But our Light is so strong it can defeat any evil!"
And so them six ran, rode, and flew!
Off to the Hellmouth to secure Crota's doom!
One by one they went down into the pit..
All so afraid that at the bottom they would submit.
But at the bottom they saw an eternal black void.
Confused why no light from their Ghost was deployed..
But with Christmas at risk they braved Crota's trap!
No idea that Thralls waited to attack!
They ran, and they ran, until they could run no more.
Lucky for them was a rune on the floor.
And before them stood a large gate of light..
The end was so near, almost in sight..
Upon crossing through they were not on the moon..
But somewhere more sinister, as they'd learn all to soon.
The blade-wielder charged, and it slashed, and swung!
But verses six Guardians how could it have won?
A blade of dark in hand they crossed the bridge..
Where a gatekeeper Knight watched over the ridge.
Dark sword in hand the Guardian charged!
But alone it was difficult to fight an opponent so large..
Blood was spilled, ashes strewn.
But the Guardian's victory came all to soon..
Christmas' fate rests in their hands..
But this story is unfinished as it now stands.
I have not completed the raid, that's as far as I've gone..
The Gatekeeper actually never fell.. He actually won.
A fireteam I need and Christmas can still be saved!
And we'll get some really good loot on the way!
Come Guardians help me! (tomorrow)
I play on an Xbox 360!
Edit: Just so you know, folk, there is a complete version somewhere on these forums..
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I love this!
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How in the world does the incomplete version keep becoming more commented on than the complete one? :o
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Change this entire one to say The Complete Poem is Somewhere Around Here.
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I did, at the bottom. Maybe I'll just edit the complete poem in this post..
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I would like to see see the full version. I can't even find it among the the forums. If anyone has it I would surely like to have it to share around. BTDubs. Its really good on whoever created this. Just like the one for the VOG someone else made.
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Ah yes the beginning version.
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I read about 3 lines before I became nauseous. I despise nothing more than Christmas shit and Destiny shit. Let alone combined into a huge pile of shit. -blam!- Christmas.
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Wow!!!! Someone needs to shut up and leave!
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You're a little late -blam!-. But since you're here , I hope you have the shittiest -blam!-ing New Years that a person could possibly have. Buh bye.
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Haha. That's dumbest thing I've heard
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Well we found mr Scrooge lol did it disgust you so much you had to make a post about it lol
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I bet you're tons of fun at parties
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Edited by VoodooN88: 12/24/2014 2:42:11 PMsome days I dislike my phone.
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[quote]It was another day in the Tower, full of Christmas cheer. Even Master Rahool lightened up as Christmas grew near. And as snowflakes began to drift down from the sky.. The Traveler, for once, didn't seem about to die. But all was not well for our Guardian crew.. As down from the sky, the Darkness it flew! "Crota's power, what do we do!?" Eris yelled, full fear. "If we don't stop Him Christmas is doomed!" A band of Guardians raised arms and got ready. As bullets aplenty rained very heavy. But Crota's plan a success it had been. He stole every present, decoration, and small Christmas tree pin! The Tower in shambles, a shadow loomed over them all. Christmas was ruined, for Crota could not fall! But the Guardians stood strong, heroes its true. "People!" One said. "We'll bring Christmas back to you! Crota strikes fear into the heart of our people! But our Light is so strong it can defeat any evil!" And so them six ran, rode, and flew! Off to the Hellmouth to secure Crota's doom! One by one they went down into the pit.. All so afraid that at the bottom they would submit. But at the bottom they saw an eternal black void. Confused why no light from their Ghost was deployed.. But with Christmas at risk they braved Crota's trap! No idea that Thralls waited to attack! They ran, and they ran, until they could run no more. Lucky for them was a rune on the floor. And before them stood a large gate of light.. The end was so near, almost in sight.. Upon crossing through they were not on the moon.. But somewhere more sinister, as they'd learn all to soon. The blade-wielder charged, and it slashed, and swung! But verses six Guardians how could it have won? A blade of dark in hand they crossed the bridge.. Where a gatekeeper Knight watched over the ridge. Dark sword in hand the Guardian charged! But alone it was difficult to fight an opponent so large.. Blood was spilled, ashes strewn. But the Guardian's victory came all to soon.. Christmas' fate rests in their hands.. But this story is unfinished as it now stands. I have not completed the raid, that's as far as I've gone.. The Gatekeeper actually never fell.. He actually won. A fireteam I need and Christmas can still be saved! And we'll get some really good loot on the way! Come Guardians help me! (tomorrow) I play on an Xbox 360! Edit: Just so you know, folk, there is a complete version somewhere on these forums..[/quote][quote][/quote]
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Hmm y does it seem like the more words u have the more replies u get
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I would guess because it implies you put thought into it.
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Edited by yourmyhostiles: 12/23/2014 12:51:36 PMRead the origional! I will search through the endless forums to find it again. Michael, again i would like to say thank you and Merry Christmas to you.
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Please bump it when you do. It kinda bugs me that this one is getting likes, but the other one's getting lost among the comments. If you can, thank you. :)
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Bythe way do you know the date cuz my thumb got tired after like 20 minutes.
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Btw, after re-reading your post I realized you said original. (thought you said complete, as I finished this) In that case this is an original piece of work. Never saw the other one. :) (which wouldn't be the original per se, but rather a separate piece, by another person)
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Edited by yourmyhostiles: 12/23/2014 11:00:01 PMSorry about that. My texting isn't that great. Oh yeah i play on 360 too.
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Ill try
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Come on man, that's the sadest -blam!-ing story ive ever heard
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Well, most of its plotline was just the raid, and what wasn't was kinda meant to follow the stereotypical "someone's gonna destroy Christmas" plotline. So I can see your point. :) Still those limitations in mind, I thought I did a good job. To each their own, though, Merry Christmas. :) (the full version is better)
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Can someone please send me a Xbox live trial code please, destiny is getting really dull now that mine expired, I will help with vault of glass or strikes....... just some one please help