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8/13/2014 3:03:56 PM
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A few grammar errors. Some flow issues. Incorrect use of italics.
Beyond that, well done. Quite enjoyable. Good use of lore.
I'll be following you for further postings. I'll be writing something myself once I complete the campaign. I'm already mapping out my characters and plot.
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Edited by Spyros: 8/13/2014 4:59:06 PMDon't you dare write anything. Ever. [spoiler][b]"Ever." is a complete sentence. You are retarded.[/b][/spoiler]
