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Edited by Gallowality:
8/17/2014 3:07:35 AM
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Care to give an opinion? Read up, Guardians! (Updated)
Below is a short chunk of a Fanfic Im working on. I just want to get some feedback. If you're a fan of the lore.
EDIT: I stayed up all night and worked on some new content for you guys. Let me take a moment though to thanks all of you guys who read my little piece of Destiny lore. I never expected such a positive reaction to my writing. You guys really warmed my heart. Unfortunately the update has too many characters to post here- so I've added a link to a website that has the updated tale in a format that's easier to read. But be sure to review the whole thing again because ive implemented a lot a changes and improvements. Please let me know if anything feels too bloated now. I hope you enjoy what I've added.
Click [url=http://www.wattpad.com/65492718-high-orbit-path-to-a-legand-high-orbit-path-of-a?utm_source=web&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&ref_id=33887937]HERE[/url] to continue the Journey.
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Edited by T1junior: 8/13/2014 12:12:01 PMDefinitely gripping and well written. I also liked how you managed to portray the personalities of each character in so few paragraphs. Definitely fits them well, I feel like I already know them. When the warlock says "couldn't have happened at a better time" did you mean "worse"? or was he being sarcastic? also, it should read "visible range: low", but If you were to write - visibility: Poor, then that is the correct form. Otherwise very good definitely keep them coming.
