You all wanted me to write a story, so here's a little taste of what I'll be handing you in a couple days (probably). [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=3#12238986]The rest of chapter one.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=7#12291639]Chapter two.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=11#12566673]Chapter three.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=14#13842765]Chapter four.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=17#14667877]Chapter five.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=20#16192180]Chapter six.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=24#17891872]Chapter seven.[/url]
[url=http://s191.photobucket.com/albums/z110/AutoRedialer/?action=view¤t=Epictale.jpg]puffy's picture. It's made of win, but I think that we can all agree on that.[/url] [url=http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omahcgeecy6.jpg]Vertrexz's comic.[/url] [url=http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c110/themadblimper/jagdpanzy.jpg]This is the tank that Blimper is using.[/url]
[i]Motion. Light. A figure was speaking in a muffled voice. Then, darkness again.[/i]
Sniper McGee woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He had been having these dreams, or rather nightmares, for a while now. He got up off of his bed and walked over to his window. A cool breeze made him feel a bit better as he looked over the city of The Flood. He felt like this place was his one home, the one place where he belonged…
A knock on the door snapped him out of his thoughts. [i]Who could be here at this hour?[/i] He walked to the door, matting down his hair on the way. He took a breath and opened the door. A figure stood, dressed in black, and was facing the other end of the hall so Sniper couldn’t see their face.
“Yes?” Sniper asked the person. He turned and looked at him, light blonde hair looked untidy and windswept, his face contorted in a mask of pain…
“Colonel Corbec?” McGee sounded surprised and confused. Corbec glanced down the hall again, then, hunched over in pain, he stumbled over to the nearest couch and grunted as he sat down. Sniper now saw that the Colonel’s hand was covering the side of his stomach. “Corbec, are…are you okay?” McGee asked. Corbec wasn’t paying attention though. He was looking around the room, glancing at the door every now and then.
“They’re coming,” the Colonel whispered. When he finally looked at Sniper and saw the questioning look he was giving him, he glanced at the door again and winced in pain. “You’ve got to get out of here,” he said through clenched teeth.
McGee looked at the spot where Corbec was holding his side, and saw his hand was covered in blood. “Corbec, what happened? Were you shot? Who did this?!” Sniper’s vision became distorted from anger.
“Listen McGee…you’ve got to…” here the Colonel paused for a moment, he grunted in pain again “…got to find Blimper. He’ll know what to do.”
Suddenly there were footsteps in the hall. They stopped in front of McGee’s door and he could hear voices mumbling something. Slowly, barely daring to breathe, Sniper crept up to the door and locked it. Immediately the voices stopped.
[Edited on 02.27.2008 11:38 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reanimation It's starting like [i]Brokeback Mountain[/i]. Do I get at least a small cameo?[/quote] You're be the weird guy in the alley wearing a pink trench coat.[/quote] That reminds me of Jimmy Urine from MSI for some reason. Is it hot pink?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lilshorty6478 ...I made a statue of you. Can I be in your story? -.- JK Very nice....Chocolate Bear :P Keep em coming. [/quote] You made a statue?!?!?!? Sweet! jk Keep it up Lemon Bear. [Edited on 08.11.2007 6:18 PM PDT]
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...I made a statue of you. Can I be in your story? -.- JK Very nice....Chocolate Bear :P Keep em coming.
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That story made me cry, nah jk it was good.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Girly Spartan Just remember to add me. ^.^[/quote]
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Just remember to add me. ^.^ [Edited on 08.11.2007 6:08 PM PDT]
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I liked the story, the only thing I think you should add is more character description. And, even though most people know who you are, or the other members are, use their full names when you first introduce them to the story. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Got it * disappears into shadows*
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I think we should all stop talking before my thread gets locked. >.<
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Can i be the History Wiz Kid that saves your ass?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reanimation It's starting like [i]Brokeback Mountain[/i]. Do I get at least a small cameo?[/quote] You're be the weird guy in the alley wearing a pink trench coat. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] puffy Well, first I was like [quote]>8 ( [/quote] But then I read your post and I was like [quote]:D[/quote][/quote] <3 [Edited on 08.11.2007 5:14 PM PDT]
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Ok. I actually went back and read the story. It was good. Before I just used control F and looked for key words/phrases.
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It's starting like [i]Brokeback Mountain[/i]. Do I get at least a small cameo?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] puffy Out of the things that made me happy then furiously angry in a split second. This one takes the cake.[/quote] ^.^ I wuv mah puffy.[/quote] Well, first I was like [quote]>8 ( [/quote] But then I read your post and I was like [quote]:D[/quote] [Edited on 08.11.2007 5:11 PM PDT]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] puffy Out of the things that made me happy then furiously angry in a split second. This one takes the cake.[/quote] ^.^ I wuv mah puffy.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Well puffy was already going to be the certified badass in my story from the beginning... [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spike588 I made the "You Phail McGee" out of cards in Hypersnipe's basement.[/quote] THAT WAS YOU?! Holy -blam!-! Okay, you've got a spot.[/quote] Sweet, thanks. Nice story btw.
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You know why Black Metal Wolf doesent come on the forums anymore? I'm the reason
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Well puffy was already going to be the certified badass in my story from the beginning... [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spike588 I made the "You Phail McGee" out of cards in Hypersnipe's basement.[/quote] THAT WAS YOU?! Holy -blam!-! Okay, you've got a spot.[/quote] Out of the things that made me happy then furiously angry in a split second. This one takes the cake.
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Well puffy was already going to be the certified badass in my story from the beginning... [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spike588 I made the "You Phail McGee" out of cards in Hypersnipe's basement.[/quote] THAT WAS YOU?! Holy -blam!-! Okay, you've got a spot. [Edited on 08.11.2007 5:01 PM PDT]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spike588 Put me in it. You better. I made your sig with my [b]own bare hands[/b]. How many people can say that?[/quote] No one except me. Not even you, since you didn't make my sig. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lepsis3942 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man It was good. When will the rest be done?[/quote] Yes, do tell[/quote] In a day or two.[/quote] I made the "You Phail McGee" out of cards in Hypersnipe's basement.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man Just don't listen to the attention whores who don't feel important because they aren't in it. Liek can i b in it pleaz!? Good so far, keep it up![/quote] Dranei [i] cannot [/i] be an attention loving whore.....
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Just don't listen to the attention whores who don't feel important because they aren't in it. "Liek can i b in it pleaz!?" Good so far, keep it up! [Edited on 08.11.2007 4:59 PM PDT]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] puffy ...... ...... ......Have my babies.[/quote] Hahahahahaha. You're in my story for sure.[/quote] [i]F*** yes[/i]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] puffy ...... ...... ......Have my babies.[/quote] Hahahahahaha. You're in my story for sure.
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...... ...... ......Have my babies.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spike588 Put me in it. You better. I made your sig with my [b]own bare hands[/b]. How many people can say that?[/quote] No one except me. Not even you, since you didn't make my sig. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lepsis3942 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man It was good. When will the rest be done?[/quote] Yes, do tell[/quote] In a day or two.