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8/11/2007 11:15:31 PM
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My story.

You all wanted me to write a story, so here's a little taste of what I'll be handing you in a couple days (probably). [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=3#12238986]The rest of chapter one.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=7#12291639]Chapter two.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=11#12566673]Chapter three.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=14#13842765]Chapter four.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=17#14667877]Chapter five.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=20#16192180]Chapter six.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=24#17891872]Chapter seven.[/url] [url=http://s191.photobucket.com/albums/z110/AutoRedialer/?action=view¤t=Epictale.jpg]puffy's picture. It's made of win, but I think that we can all agree on that.[/url] [url=http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omahcgeecy6.jpg]Vertrexz's comic.[/url] [url=http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c110/themadblimper/jagdpanzy.jpg]This is the tank that Blimper is using.[/url] [i]Motion. Light. A figure was speaking in a muffled voice. Then, darkness again.[/i] Sniper McGee woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He had been having these dreams, or rather nightmares, for a while now. He got up off of his bed and walked over to his window. A cool breeze made him feel a bit better as he looked over the city of The Flood. He felt like this place was his one home, the one place where he belonged… A knock on the door snapped him out of his thoughts. [i]Who could be here at this hour?[/i] He walked to the door, matting down his hair on the way. He took a breath and opened the door. A figure stood, dressed in black, and was facing the other end of the hall so Sniper couldn’t see their face. “Yes?” Sniper asked the person. He turned and looked at him, light blonde hair looked untidy and windswept, his face contorted in a mask of pain… “Colonel Corbec?” McGee sounded surprised and confused. Corbec glanced down the hall again, then, hunched over in pain, he stumbled over to the nearest couch and grunted as he sat down. Sniper now saw that the Colonel’s hand was covering the side of his stomach. “Corbec, are…are you okay?” McGee asked. Corbec wasn’t paying attention though. He was looking around the room, glancing at the door every now and then. “They’re coming,” the Colonel whispered. When he finally looked at Sniper and saw the questioning look he was giving him, he glanced at the door again and winced in pain. “You’ve got to get out of here,” he said through clenched teeth. McGee looked at the spot where Corbec was holding his side, and saw his hand was covered in blood. “Corbec, what happened? Were you shot? Who did this?!” Sniper’s vision became distorted from anger. “Listen McGee…you’ve got to…” here the Colonel paused for a moment, he grunted in pain again “…got to find Blimper. He’ll know what to do.” Suddenly there were footsteps in the hall. They stopped in front of McGee’s door and he could hear voices mumbling something. Slowly, barely daring to breathe, Sniper crept up to the door and locked it. Immediately the voices stopped. [Edited on 02.27.2008 11:38 AM PST]
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  • Awesome. Keep it up. One of the few I actually I want to read.

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  • Thanks everybody! ^.^

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lilshorty6478 Wow, I actually [i]want[/i] to read more. One question though: Who's/What's TheMadBlimper?[/quote] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Account/profile.aspx?uid=1781997]Mah buddy.[/url][/quote] Oh him. Anywho, VERY NICE!

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  • nvm. [Edited on 08.11.2007 7:33 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lilshorty6478 Wow, I actually [i]want[/i] to read more. One question though: Who's/What's TheMadBlimper?[/quote] You don't know blimper... hes taking a forced break from the forums right now :[

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] lilshorty6478 Wow, I actually [i]want[/i] to read more. One question though: Who's/What's TheMadBlimper?[/quote] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Account/profile.aspx?uid=1781997]Mah buddy.[/url]

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  • hmm.... Not bad.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Girly Spartan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man I demand to be in it!!! *shakes fist*[/quote] fixed[/quote] Nope, I could care less if I'm in it. If I am great, but I would near beat my life on it that I'm not. Damn! Now it sounds like I'm using reverse psychology. [/quote] .... Anyways, well writen McGee!

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  • Wow, I actually [i]want[/i] to read more. One question though: Who's/What's TheMadBlimper? [Edited on 08.11.2007 7:29 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Girly Spartan [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man I demand to be in it!!! *shakes fist*[/quote] fixed[/quote] Nope, I could care less if I'm in it. If I am great, but I would near beat my life on it that I'm not. Damn! Now it sounds like I'm using reverse psychology.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Oh, you will.[/quote] Okay then, I shall sleep better tonight....

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  • The rest of Chaptah One: “We know you’re in there McGee,” a gruff voice said, “So just come out with your hands up.” Sniper looked frantically back at Corbec, who pointed at Sniper’s bed sheets then at the window. McGee nodded, and started tying sheets together. Corbec tried stalling them by asking, “So why are you after McGee?” There was a pause, and then the gruff voice said, “Well well, looks like Corbec didn’t die after all. Did you come here thinking you would receive refuge? Big mistake Corbec.” The Colonel gave a coarse chuckle, and his icy blue eyes glinted for a second. “Oh no, I didn’t come here seeking refuge. I came here to stop you from getting what you wanted.” Sniper had just finished tying the last of the sheets together when the Colonel looked over at him. He got up with a great amount of effort and walked over to McGee. He grabbed him by the shoulder and whispered, “Find Blimper. Watch your back. Trust no one.” He then crouched behind the couch and took out a pistol. Sniper tied the end of his sheets around a desk’s leg that was near the window and threw the rest out the window. He had only just climbed over the windowsill when two men broke down the door, brandishing pistols of their own. He heard a couple shots, and his last sight of the Colonel was his icy blue eyes, still glinting, but now they were staring without seeing. Saving his grief for another time, McGee climbed the rest of the way down the building’s wall. Sticking to the shadows, he made his way to TheMadBlimper’s house. But he couldn’t help but feel like there were eyes in the shadows, watching what he was doing, predicting his next move. He thought he heard footsteps nearby, but he gave it no thought. [I]Why were there men after him? And why would the Colonel give his life to protect him?[/I] Thoughts clouded his mind, and his senses… Footsteps. Directly behind him. He kept on walking, and the first alley he came to he turned into. He immidiately crouched behind a few garbage cans and waited until the footsteps became louder. A figure appeared, although McGee couldn’t make out his face. The man paused, scanning the dark alley for a few moments before proceeding cautiously. When he was close enough, Sniper sprang from his hiding place and tackled him. They were both flung to the ground, and they start wrestling. McGee saw something flash and immidiately kicked the man away. They both got up, panting. The man had a knife in his hand, but Sniper was trying to study his face… “Eight Oh 8 State? What the hell are you doing here?” 808 seemed to recognize Sniper at the same time and looked a bit sheepish. “I heard you were being hunted, so I had to make sure you got where you were going safely.” Sniper digested this information with a shocked look in his face. His stomach turned upside down as he looked back at 808. “I’m…I’m being hunted? But why?” Sniper asked, his eyes wide. “I haven’t heard that much, only that you’re in danger,” 808 said as he looked over his shoulder. “Come on, we’d better get going.” [Edited on 08.11.2007 7:25 PM PDT]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man I demand to be in it!!! *shakes fist*[/quote] fixed

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  • I demand to see death and peril in this story! *shakes fist*

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  • Hiro Gamerz. I'm doing pretty good...you know...basking in my shining glory... You? =P

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  • Hi, Mcgee, How are you? :) lol...

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  • Great story so far. Good job.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Eight Oh 8 State I have been informed that the rest of the chapter is being released this very night! Repent! The time is nigh![/quote] Ya, i asked Sniper, he said 2night!

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  • I have been informed that the rest of the chapter is being released this very night! Repent! The time is nigh!

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reanimation That reminds me of Jimmy Urine from MSI for some reason. Is it hot pink?[/quote] The hottest. And thank you to whoever complimented me. :-)[/quote] *dances* Jimmy's hot.

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  • Flame on! Impressive. I leave for an hour and it's up to three pages.

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  • Can't wait to read the rest. 50th post.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reanimation That reminds me of Jimmy Urine from MSI for some reason. Is it hot pink?[/quote] The hottest. And thank you to whoever complimented me. :-)

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dranei [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] PETERSON4 Dranei [i] cannot [/i] be an attention loving whore.....[/quote] I am a whore, but certainly not an attention whore.[/quote] Ha ha. I want to be in it, please. I'm on your friends list. (And so is about a 100 other people) It could be that I just die. I would be fine with that.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] PETERSON4 Dranei [i] cannot [/i] be an attention loving whore.....[/quote] I am a whore, but certainly not an attention whore.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Reanimation It's starting like [i]Brokeback Mountain[/i]. Do I get at least a small cameo?[/quote] You're be the weird guy in the alley wearing a pink trench coat.[/quote] That reminds me of Jimmy Urine from MSI for some reason. Is it hot pink?

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