You all wanted me to write a story, so here's a little taste of what I'll be handing you in a couple days (probably). [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=3#12238986]The rest of chapter one.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=7#12291639]Chapter two.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=11#12566673]Chapter three.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=14#13842765]Chapter four.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=17#14667877]Chapter five.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=20#16192180]Chapter six.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=24#17891872]Chapter seven.[/url]
[url=http://s191.photobucket.com/albums/z110/AutoRedialer/?action=view¤t=Epictale.jpg]puffy's picture. It's made of win, but I think that we can all agree on that.[/url] [url=http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omahcgeecy6.jpg]Vertrexz's comic.[/url] [url=http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c110/themadblimper/jagdpanzy.jpg]This is the tank that Blimper is using.[/url]
[i]Motion. Light. A figure was speaking in a muffled voice. Then, darkness again.[/i]
Sniper McGee woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He had been having these dreams, or rather nightmares, for a while now. He got up off of his bed and walked over to his window. A cool breeze made him feel a bit better as he looked over the city of The Flood. He felt like this place was his one home, the one place where he belonged…
A knock on the door snapped him out of his thoughts. [i]Who could be here at this hour?[/i] He walked to the door, matting down his hair on the way. He took a breath and opened the door. A figure stood, dressed in black, and was facing the other end of the hall so Sniper couldn’t see their face.
“Yes?” Sniper asked the person. He turned and looked at him, light blonde hair looked untidy and windswept, his face contorted in a mask of pain…
“Colonel Corbec?” McGee sounded surprised and confused. Corbec glanced down the hall again, then, hunched over in pain, he stumbled over to the nearest couch and grunted as he sat down. Sniper now saw that the Colonel’s hand was covering the side of his stomach. “Corbec, are…are you okay?” McGee asked. Corbec wasn’t paying attention though. He was looking around the room, glancing at the door every now and then.
“They’re coming,” the Colonel whispered. When he finally looked at Sniper and saw the questioning look he was giving him, he glanced at the door again and winced in pain. “You’ve got to get out of here,” he said through clenched teeth.
McGee looked at the spot where Corbec was holding his side, and saw his hand was covered in blood. “Corbec, what happened? Were you shot? Who did this?!” Sniper’s vision became distorted from anger.
“Listen McGee…you’ve got to…” here the Colonel paused for a moment, he grunted in pain again “…got to find Blimper. He’ll know what to do.”
Suddenly there were footsteps in the hall. They stopped in front of McGee’s door and he could hear voices mumbling something. Slowly, barely daring to breathe, Sniper crept up to the door and locked it. Immediately the voices stopped.
[Edited on 02.27.2008 11:38 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mabon Is the road trip in the story? Will it come to Manitoba?![/quote] No it's not in my story. I want to have a Floodian roadtrip when I turn 18. We'll be going to Brazil!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] McKenney II [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dranei Very nice McGee. Can it be Dranei times now?[/quote] Translation: ver niec. kan be Dranei tiem now?[/quote] Better Translation... [b]Ver nice...can it bez Dranei tiemz now plez?[/b]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Veneficus Zero Sniper! You don't love me anymore! D:[/quote] If I didn't love you, then you wouldn't be coming on my roadtrip.[/quote] Is the road trip in the story? Will it come to Manitoba?!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Veneficus Zero Sniper! You don't love me anymore! D:[/quote] If I didn't love you, then you wouldn't be coming on my roadtrip.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Could take anywhere between 2 - 5 days.[/quote] Thanks, I'll keep checking in for updates.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mabon As for following them, any info on how long you plan on taking inbetween chapters?[/quote] Could take anywhere between 2 - 5 days. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Veneficus Zero OMG. Sniper. I want inside you. That story was hawt. If I Don't show up in it somewhere I'll call shenanigans. I swear I will.[/quote] kthxbai[/quote] Sniper! You don't love me anymore! D:
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mabon As for following them, any info on how long you plan on taking inbetween chapters?[/quote] Could take anywhere between 2 - 5 days. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Veneficus Zero OMG. Sniper. I want inside you. That story was hawt. If I Don't show up in it somewhere I'll call shenanigans. I swear I will.[/quote] kthxbai
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OMG. Sniper. I want inside you. That story was hawt. If I Don't show up in it somewhere I'll call shenanigans. I swear I will.
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As for following them, any info on how long you plan on taking inbetween chapters?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mabon Yeah, robot ninja dinosaur wars does take a little bit of pizazz to come up with.[/quote] And thanks for the compliment Mabon. Thank you to whoever is going to follow my stories.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee You're amazing puffy.[/quote] Yeah, robot ninja dinosaur wars does take a little bit of pizazz to come up with.
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You're amazing puffy.
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This story is like if a bunch of super-intelligent Dinosaurs traveled to the future where a three-way war between Pirates, Ninjas and super space aliens was being waged and the Dinosaurs had to use laser guns to fend themselves while they ripped a time warp to go back to their own time. And the Dinosaurs are also robots, God damn.
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The final part of the chapter was just as good as the beginning. Keep it coming Sniper. All props go to you.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] big team basher OMG GHANDI 2 KILLS CORBEC!!! Edit- saved thread for great justice.[/quote] How do you know it was Ghandi 2? It might have been you. ;-) [Edited on 08.11.2007 9:34 PM PDT]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Eight Oh 8 State 808? -blam!- yeah. Good job.[/quote]Be careful what you wish for...I smell a traitor ...uh...EVILCAM KILLS DUMBLEDORE. EDIT Damn you big team basher, you stole my idea. [Edited on 08.11.2007 9:24 PM PDT]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] big team basher OMG GHANDI 2 KILLS CORBEC!!! Edit- saved thread for great justice.[/quote] Na, that was me, oviously, i always knew i was badass.....
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OMG GHANDI 2 KILLS CORBEC!!! Edit- saved thread for great justice. [Edited on 08.11.2007 8:48 PM PDT]
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Nice job so far McGee. I can't wait for my epic apperance. Even if it's for one line and i get pwned. If possible, give me a tophat. [Edited on 08.11.2007 8:26 PM PDT]
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Hey Sniper! I really want to read the rest of the story, so finish it up you lazy sloth. Also, consider the following. Our friendship is [b]OVER[/b] if I'm not included! (Just kidding...who'd want to read a story with me in it anyway. Or wait, maybe if you were to kill me off [i]REALLY[/i] fast in a hilarious situation...gah whatever.) Lol at camoflage for asking for a summary!
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[i][b][u]BIBLICAL PHAILURE[/i][/b][/u] I will flip a -blam!- if I'm not in this story...
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808? -blam!- yeah. Good job.
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It's awesome. I would like longer chapters, but still awesome.
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It's good, yeah write more.
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Never read something like this before, but I like it. Please continue. :-)
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Awesome. Keep it up. One of the few I actually I want to read.