Paragraphs 4 (definitively) & 5 (IMO) Spoilers [spoiler]I did not see her mother for those eight weeks;[/spoiler] she stood wh outside of my [spoiler]nursing chamber, and her ceremonial family and house, the old ways made[/spoiler] vigil honored our atc Both errors are in the chestpiece. IMO [b]wh[/b] should be [b]whole[/b]and [b]atc[/b] should be [b]act[/b]. [spoiler]But... my momentum faltered over time.[/spoiler] My focus [spoiler]my dreams, narrowed down to the size of my thumb.[/spoiler] , My grandest inspiration. [spoiler]I needed no other.[/spoiler] Comma misplacement and capitalization error only on chestpiece again. My focus, SPOILER My grandest...