[quote] "Guardian, we should get moving," her ghost said, with a long pause. There's more people who we could save,"[/quote] Ya missed quotation marks before “There’s”.     [quote]He stood up, dusting of his boot legs.[/quote] Either I’m forgetting how English works (which ain’t impossible at this point) or boot legs ain’t a thing. Ya also missed an “f” in off. ___________________________________________ Other than that, I don’t see anything wrong here. Great work, buddy! [spoiler]Now you got Mcreed in here....I really need to work on more logs.....[/spoiler]