These are really interesting. Great job
There are a few grammar errors like "outscirt" is supposed to be "outskirt" and "caut" is supposed to be "caught"
[spoiler]sorry that haven't added these to my archive yet. The section yours goes in ran out of space, and I haven't gotten the time to make an expansion post. But I'll take care of it as soon as I can[/spoiler]
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No problem.