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Edited by abearjo:
3/1/2018 7:17:32 PM
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Fantastic! This was really good for a shorter part of the story but nonetheless a great part of the story. I really liked the addition of an anchoring device in the story (a gun in this case) that the character relies on to help them through the part of a story. Now it may just be me reading fast. But I felt like the last stretch of him escaping was a little rushed and quick. Not building up suspension can really let down and audience at a big reveal. Other than that I say that this was a fine addition to the story! Take your time finding out the best possible ending for this story that fits your image of it. If you ever need some constructive criticism or your stumped on a certain part of the story feel free to PM me and I’ll see if I can help you out. :)
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Thanks, man. Don't expect a, I don't know, explanation. I mean, is there a real explanation to Freddy Kruger. Exactly. I feel like with certain stories there can't be an explanation of how this creature was made, or where it came from. because it's make-believe, you know. The cave(den) will be described more in the final part though. Why don't you start posting stories too? I think it would be cool and fun. You don't have to obviously, but if you do, like I said, it would be cool man.
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I’ll keep it in mind ;)
