Alrighty goofheads! I actually need some feedback on the text. I am pretty sure I have been grammatically incorrect at some points, so please address these to me so I can improve my English skills. :]
Also, perhaps this one isn't that funny, but even I can't always be "funny".
Other than that, enjoy! ^3^
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Edited by king of masons: 9/26/2016 5:09:18 PMYou need to change the hadn't to had