[i]The Black Hollow, Venus[/i]
There were some places that were so desolate, so dead and broken that even the Vex couldn't find a use for it. Charcoal earth and carved stone composed the volcanic cave. The ground was gritty and the air smelt of sulphur, as it always did. The brilliant blue of bacteria pooled where indents in the floor let liquid gather. But books lined carved out shelves and small trinkets and observational equipment was scattered about. It was a refuge, passed from one Warlock to the next.
Xalli was a Thanotanaut. A death-scientist. She had been out here in the Black Hollow for several months now, having found it in an old tome buried in the Vanguard archives. She was working on her largest project yet, compiling years of data from other Thanotanautes into one cohesive database, and using it to pinpoint where, physically, guardian minds went when they died.
"Another reference to Queens... Like the War Cult report, remember?" Xalli's ghost disliked the location, but they needed privacy for this. Many of the reports they were gathering had been labeled false or heretical at some point.
"Hmm... Put it with group B. Now, I just need..." The ground shook.
There was an audible [i]crack[/i], like bone but deeper, heavier.
"Were you keeping track of the Volcano's eruption cycle?!" Xalli began pulling together papers, scrambling to grab everything.
"I'm afraid not. I'll prepare the ship. We have copies of everything, GO!" Her ghost floated ahead and out into the Venusian rain.
Another crack, now dividing the cavern in two. Blue-hot flames licked at the papers as Xalli ran past. She grabbed her handcannon and bolted out of the cavern as a massive, primal roar came from the planet, and she looked to the volcano's slopes, and saw lines of blue fire begin streaking down the sides.
"Get in, NOW!" Her ship rose up in front of her as she transmatted aboard.
They began flying up into the Venusian clouds, looking back as smoke and fire began belching out of the mountain.
"That was a close one, huh? I copied all our data, don't worry about-"
Suddenly, a whip of lightning stabbed into the ship, bursting an engine and sending it into freefall.
"Crap! Ghost, can you get us out of here?" Xalli began trying to operate the emergency escape, being met with a broken [i]thnk[/i] each time.
"No! The systems are all offline! We're stuck in here! I can't get us out-"
The ship slammed into the mountainside, ripping off one engine instantly, before sliding down the rugged slope, bits and pieces of machinery being ripped out by the rocks. Xalli fought with the ship, before summoning a blast of Void and shooting off the cockpit. She was wounded, pale Awoken blood blinding her vision. She saw that the ship was going to slide into the sea and melt it whole. She pooled all her Light, and jumped, trying to stabilize herself and keep from sliding down. She managed to land in a ledge on the mountainside, as she blearily called out for her ghost, before blacking out.
[i]Thieve's Den, Venus[/i]
When she awoke, Xalli was tied to something. She couldn't tell what. Her helmet was covered in ash, and something was wrong with her eyes. She heard voices. Fallen voices, chattering about something. She needed to see, but her visor was black, and she felt something warm and sticky on her face. Blood? Was she blind? She didn't think about it.
"Guardian! We have deal for you, Yeeess?" The voice was rough and insectoid. She did not respond.
"House Winter let you live, yes, if you show our Servitors how to find Great Machine. Our records fail, and other houses do not speak with Winter."
She did not answer.
"We could let you return, give warning to Great Machine that Eliksni are coming to find it again, if you wish."
She did not speak.
"Answer, Guardian, or we do to you what we did with your Half-Servitor."
She had heard enough. Rage, combined with blinding Light, ripped out the shackles chaining her, as a ball of Void energy slammed into the Fallen she couldn't see but knew were there. She tossed a grenade towards other sources of Fallen chatter and began tossing wave after wave of nova bombs at her enemies.
When the Redjack team arrived, almost a year later, all they found in the prison was a black helmet, caked with ash which had become stuck to the armor, and the body of an awoken warlock, shot to death by Fallen soldiers.
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2 RepliesSo people stop saying it, I can't move the post to another section, but I have heard you and my next story/backstory will be in #community. Thanks for all the feedback though! Glad to see you folk enjoy it!
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This belongs in #community, not #lore. This is not lore, this is a fan fiction, therefore making it belong in #community
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Great Story, but you should put (fan made) next to the title. I know it is not actual lore, but some people might think this is actual lore
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Edited by HearingTester21: 6/7/2016 2:20:05 AMShe could have survived with the right perks SERIOUSLY though!!! ... ... ... Stupid thot
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You can edit the #tag Just edit, go down to where it says #lore, and change it to #community :)
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7 RepliesEdited by Golden Chocobo: 6/5/2016 11:42:59 PMHoly shit... Damn, mate, you've GOT to write more of these.
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Very nice use of fallen language
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All for the most boring looking exotic helmet in the game unfortunately.
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More pls
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This is great! Could you make one for achleophage symbiote?
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Is it bad that I only felt bad for the ghost?
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1 ReplyI guess it's just me, but it's obvious it's not actual lore, when has bunjie ever put that much detail in its lore just saying. I think it's badass and would enjoy more like it! But I guess like everything else in the world it has to have a correct Label!
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1 ReplyIf this ain't official loretaken from the grimiore move it to #Gallery or risk it getting moved for you.
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Just wish it looked different. More cooler and had some Void aura.
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Edited by KannibalKlown: 6/5/2016 5:26:29 PMNice writing But I'd recommend re labeling it to Fan Fiction because that's what it is. Good fan fiction but fan fiction. Lore tends to be about the actual back story
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1 ReplyLore: Just take a vanilla Vendor helmet, paint it black. Voila! New Exotic.
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5 RepliesArmor Lore: Obsidian Mind rewrite: Toland liked the new helmets that were coming out. He didn't like the color. So he painted it in his garage. He told everyone it was an exotic. They believed him.
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11 RepliesThis isn't lore, stop it idiots will start taking it serious.
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Very good writing! I wish I had your talent.
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Fitting. I will allow this and accept it into lore, until a more definitive history is proven, though ANONPIG is the final curator.
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dude you did great keep it up
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Seriously why isn't there grimoire on amour like there is on weapons ugh :(
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This is really cool and well written but it would be better to label as fan fiction. Doesn't stop it being good tho
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First time I've read any post longer than 1 paragraph. Nicely done. Don't let the haters get on you. Jelly can be an ugly thing. They're mad they aren't that creative.
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... Amazing, oh reader mine, amazing... I like it... I like it a lot... ... Now you've made me want to do one... Let's see....... Ah....... I know....... [i]hehehehe[/i]
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Good story but how'd the helmet become obsidian? Obsidian is a stone, ash would not have created obsidian and the helmet would just look dirty, not carved