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Chapter 30 has finally seen the Light of day!! https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1371758/178094990/0/0 link to Table of contents
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Well read the next part, it explains what's went on after this As far as if they are alright? Only time can tell
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Oh, sorry, meant to reply to the next one. The story kind of abandons her.
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When you have to deal with 6+ characters it's hard to balance everyone's reaction... That's my fault but that's partially the reason why, I have to focus on other characters at times rather than others
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Edited by ookshmook: 4/12/2016 8:36:48 PMI would have no problem, but, just like the [i]saga of hiccup the horrendous haddock iii[/i] [quote]now we must unfortunately leave hiccup in this terrible state of suspense and mortal peril, as at that moment, camacazi... [/quote]
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Haha yea that is true that's why I try to give each character their spotlight or a bit of dialogue here and there so everyone knows they still exist
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But did you [i]really [/i] have to leave Kate, just as she had tae kan (because the name [i]totally[/i] doesn't sound like 'taken')'s foot on her head?
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No he's just knocked her to the ground with his foot and stepped on her for a little bit. If I wanted her head through his foot, I'd state otherwise. And the purpose of this was to show how outclassed they were by him, a true villian not an obstacle
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I didn't say that. Nice villain, though. He Really feels formidable. Side note, tithe is genarated by displays of power, not, you know, taken gluttony.
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Is that it? I was sure tithing was the Hives was of feeding their Worms (each Thralls gives part of their meal to an Acolyte then his Knights and so on and forth until it hit Oryx and the higher-ups) I'll look at it again. And Tae Ken's whole deal is he like to feast and take what he wants (I have a Grimore card [sort of] that I wrote about him in the #Gallery somewhere)
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Ah, I see your mistake. Hive feed their worm by displaying power, [quote]and you, aurash, you must never cease to conquer, for as your power grows, so will your wyrm's appetite.[/quote]
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Huh... I'll make note of that and check a bit more carefully next time, but either way, Tae Ken's covered in the power department so all is good
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Thanks for correcting me, doesn't happen very often so I appreciate the critique
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You're welcome.