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8/10/2005 10:45:16 PM
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The Forgotten Spartan

[i]For the record, this is a fanfiction story that [/i]I [i]wrote, it has no official connection to Bungie, it is merely my story.[/i] [b]PROLOGUE 0800 Hours, December 17, 2514(Military Calendar) /Epsilon Eridani System, planet Reach UNSC Priority Transmission 076452B-74 Encryption Code: Red Public Key: file/access Delta From: ONI Section Three To: Dr. Catherine Halsey M.D., Ph.D., Civilian Consultant (CIN: 10141-026-SRB4695) Subject: SPARTAN/Approval Classification: Restricted[/b] [i]/Start File/ Dr. Halsey, Project SPARTAN green lighted. SPARTAN I Augmentation To take place 10 years after this transmission. Any Recruit you Request Will Be Yours.[/i] [b]CHAPTER ONE 1700 Hours December 17, 2524 (Military Calendar) Epsilon Eridani System, ONI Medical Facility, in Orbit around Planet Reach[/b] The Cryopod doors opened, and Dr. Halsey walked into the room. The pods were lined up along the wall and various tubes connected to them. The Doctor’s heels clicked loudly on the tile floor as she walked towards the pods. The man in the pod on the left stumbled out and fell on his hands and knees. His physique was perfect, “good” she said to her self as she turned to face him. “Congratulations Lieutenant,” she said, “ You’re the only survivor.” The man started to choke and his hands slipped. He fell on his face and slipped into unconsciousness. [b]0800 Hours December 27,2524 (Military Calendar) Epsilon Eridani System, Hawthorne Medical Facility, Planet Reach[/b] First Lieutenant Matthew Simmons awoke on a hospital bed. His vision was blurred, but he could see that he was hooked up to several machines and I.V.s. outside the room’s window was DR. Halsey conversing with a Doctor, Simmons marveled at her intelligence, she was the reason he agreed to be in this program at all. The woman was brilliant, and there was something unexplainable that attracted Simmons to her. His thoughts were interrupted by Halsey’s entrance. “ How are you Lieutenant?” She asked. “Fine,” he replied, they both new this was a lie, Simmons was in immense pain, his bones ached, all his muscles seemed torn, and he could barely move. “ Of course you are,” she said mockingly, “ You have been given command of an ODST Platoon on Richter VII, I think you will enjoy it.” Simmons knew that would be trouble, ODSTs were the finest units the Marines had, and they didn’t take to kindly to fresh meat, either. But what had Halsey said, if he survived the Augmentation, which he did, he would be physically altered to have physical prowess to the likes of which he could not imagine. Being hardly able to move, though, was something he could imagine. “ You will make a full recovery within the week, then you will be transferred to Richter VII aboard the Destroyer Cherokee” Halsey told him. “ A week!” Simmons shouted, Halsey was not startled at all, “ I’m not waiting a week,” he told her, as he pulled the I.V.s from his arms, unconnected the machines, and stood up. “ I would really advise more rest,” Halsey told him. “ And I would really advise you stow it ma’am, I’m leaving.” “ Doctor’s orders,” she said Defiantly “ You’re a civilian, I am a Marine,” he told her as he strode out of the room “ You may be a marine,” Dr. Halsey said softly “ but more importantly you’re a Spartan.” [b]Chapter Two 0800 Hours January 3, 2525 (Military Calendar) Aboard UNSC Destroyer Cherokee en route to Richter VII[/b] Simmons had made a “full recovery” all right, could run over 50 KPH, and he had always been a slow runner before. He could also lift around eight hundred pounds. Everything seemed slow to him, too, like he was watching the world at half-speed. He marveled at his muscle mass and reflexes. He went to the gym aboard the Cherokee every day, went down to the section that was rotating at two Gs and would work out for hours. He also studied tactics and reviewed ancient battles; he would be ready to lead his platoon for sure. The only thing that bothered him about his new life was the fact that he was alone; he was the only survivor. His wished some of the others had survived. His best friend from the academy had been in the pod next to him, Dr. Halsey said the Augmentation went too fast, and his brain over loaded from all the change. She also said she was happy with the results. How? Nineteen men died, one survived, how were those good results? The Doctor must have had her reasons, she always did, but Simmons did not know what her reasons for this could have been, how had she helped humanity at all? Simmons pondered this for days, he refused to go into Cryo, and was therefore left with ten days to do nothing but think, work out and dread the day they would arrive at Richter VII. On the Day they were scheduled to arrive on Richter VII Simmons went to visit Major Sullivan, he was the executive officer of the Battalion of ODSTs stationed on the Cherokee. Sullivan had been a teacher at the Marine Academy At Quantico on Earth, and Taught Simmons for two years. Simmons wanted to ask him for advice on how to lead the hostile men in his charge; he wanted advice you couldn’t get in a book. As he took the elevator to the Major’s quarters he contemplated why the man had given up his teaching post for field duty, was he itching for combat, or sick of fresh officers asking him for advice on Marine life? He hoped it was the first one as he knocked on the Major’s door. “ Enter,” said a grizzly voice, Simmons remembered it as the Major’s. He opened the door and walked in. Sullivan had put in wood paneling and pictures of HEV pods dropping were hanging on the wall. It smelled of smoke, which was of course against regulations, but if anyone dared tell that to the Major, they would regret it during their Hospital stay. The Major’s voice wasn’t the only thing grizzly about him, he was 6’5, all muscle and looked as though he weighed three hundred pounds, At first Simmons felt threatened, then he remembered that he could lift Sullivan over his head and throw him through the door, and he straightened up. Sullivan was looking over a data pad, then looked up at Simmons, he had a scar streaking down his left cheek that was not there when he left Quantico, his once slick black hair now contained streaks of gray. He had aged a lot since he had been transferred to the Cherokee and made a dozen drops into rebel territory. “ Can I help you, Lieutenant?” He said, glancing over his data pad once more “ I hope so, Sir, I was hoping for advice on leadership now that I am going to lead a platoon of my own, Sir.” Sullivan dropped his data pad and got up from his desk, and walked around Simmons, surveying him, he stopped in front of him; he apparently liked what he saw. “ I’ve heard things about you Simmons, men say you can lift 800 pounds, that’s not human, what do you have to say about that?” “ Nothing, Sir,” Simmons knew that project SPARTAN was classified. “ So you admit it then?” the Major said inquisitively. “ I have changed since the academy, Sir” Simmons said hoping the Major would change subjects, he did. “ So you want advice, eh? Well I’ll tell you one thing Simmons, show them who boss, remind them it’s you, not their Sergeant, you, can you do that?” the Major asked him. “ Yes, Sir I can.” Simmons told him. “ Good, then you’re dismissed, Lieutenant” Simmons saluted Sullivan and exited the room. Show them who’s boss? This was the Marine Corps; his men should already know who’s boss. But Simmons made a note of the advice anyway, hoping he wouldn’t have to use it. Simmons packed his things into a duffel bag, and then slipped into his uniform. He placed his Standard Issue M6C Magnum in its holster, picked up his bag and walked to the hangar. The Cherokee would get in orbit around Richter VII and Simmons’ Pelican Drop ship would go down to the surface on its own. With the planet in such chaos with the recent rebel insurgency, Simmons thought this was a bad idea, one drop ship would be an easy target for rebel anti aircraft. [Edited on 07.09.2007 3:38 PM PDT]
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  • I'm still on the fence about that. What do you guys want?

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  • That's the sad life of school, it takes up time...but since the break is coming up I'm thinking that the Skip will get some revisions done. About that Skip are you going to post it all once you're done with the entire edit or are you going to give us some tid-bits of information?!?

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  • *sagechoach roles across the forum* wow no new chapters in almost 3 weeks this makes me sad :(

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  • -read the thread black led-

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  • That does sound like some pretty tough critics though...English majors?!? I never found myself to enjoy reading but one boring day at work and the internet sure did change that. I didn't mean that it was going to get canceled because that would not be a good thing at all...we got your back Rainman, just let us know if you need anything.

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  • VERY NICE

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  • English majors huh? What collage? Just curious. I finished an English major course in collage with top of the class grades online early last week. Too bad it wasn't my course but I did win $100 from my mom on a bet that she would get a better grade than me. Hmmmm. On topic: How is the update coming along any major problems that I or someone else could help with because I'm sure we are willing.

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  • I just spent over six hours going through this thread and I must say: "wow". Most fan-fiction makes my eyes bleed, but you sir have managed to capture a universe that is dear to me and build on it with quality material. I am most impressed by your writing, while usually any sort of writing about a universe NOT created in a book makes me cringe (it's strange, but I just plain find it painful) I found myself raptured by the plot, characters and presentation. My only problem was your story's conflict with Orion project. However now I endorse your story, heck I wish it was part of the Halo universe! As an afterthought, it makes sense that a batch of Spartans would be created before the Spartan IIs. The UNSC had greatly improved the augmentations since the Orion project and likely would need some guinea pigs to perfect the new techniques on. They take some grown marines and augment them before they started on the more valuable children they selected. Since the Spartan IIs were augmented from an early age they could reach better performance, but adults would likely still work out. I find your writing top notch, in fact I wouldn't have been surprised had this been the work of a professional author. I may not be the best reviewer, but my parents were both English majors and I read War and Peace at the age of 13. Just to show you some of the writers you're up against. ;) You are brilliant at making memorable characters, every interaction seems human and you really show that everyone has a personality. My hat is off to you sir. Or rather my headphones ;) [Edited on 12/5/2006]

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  • Not cancelled, just on Hiatus.

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  • Well hey it happens...it's alright though because when he is done with that part he will let us know how it's going...I hope. Them covenant don't know what's going to hit them though when the story gets back to them...man, I feel like I'm waiting for the last episode of my favorite shows and then the show gets cancelled...lol.

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  • Oh so at the good part you decide to rewrite...Lol..Well atleast tell us when you have rewritten chapters...(;

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  • you know, i sat here and read the entire first page, then i thought to myself, how many ages are in the thread, yeah, i think i'll start buying the books for myself, there are a -blam!- load more interesting than i thought. I've gotta start collectin these, i would love to, but i'm not gonna sit here for the next few hours and read like 50 somethin pages of , well an awsome book. I would love to, but, i'd much rather just read the book [Edited on 12/1/2006]

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  • Sorry Chief...no chapter. The Skip is in the process of rewriting the first part, over the past year his skills have changed so he feels it's time to edit for now and then continue with the story when he's done with that.

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  • New.Chapter.Been a long time.

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  • keep it up skip. I haven't posted in a while but i still check in every now and then.

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  • Rainman, your story is truly a fantastic tale. It's finally something ORIGINAL, it's on something that nobody ever really refers to, the Spartan 1's. It kinda fills us with somethign to ponder about, Bungie really never refers to the Spartan 1's.........Keep up the good work!

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  • Aghh...man, it always changes...well I'll get you some cheese for next time. Gramer iz tha most imprtent prt ov ne stori. Lol. Well good luck with that and let us know what's going on with the story update.

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  • That is a good guess, but it was actually pepperoni due to a lack of cheese pizza in my fridge. Still making progress, though it's mainly just fixing grammar right now.

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  • Megan X Sucked me My odes are so fresh god damn im a monster. Megan wants to suck me, how much will it cost her? Im so good at this sh'it it is fuc'king crazy, go brush your hair ho stop being so lazy. Megan sucked me, its not a joke im 9 inches and she didnt choke...Get off acklete balls the sh'it is so gross, 8 inches in your mouth is that the most? Cram some more in, you know you can... suck it all down and kiss da big man. You sucked of quinn over the net.... that’s so gross I bet.. that mustve been funny, i bet you were typing "Give it to me honey" This ode is coming at you, straight from the dome, i saw your huge dildo, keep iding that chrome. You squat on that that thing like it is your job... keep on fuc'king that big ass electronic knob. This ode is over, the deed is done, the s3x was terrible, but this rhyme was so FUN.

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  • Well if I know the Skip then for him and the rewrite...it is CHEESE PIZZA. So can we expect anything soon or will it all come in one giant, uninterupted piece?!?

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  • pretty good and i smell inklings of the Halo books in here... maybe not would that be peperoni or sausage pizza?

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  • Just want to let you know, the rewrite has begun, I am making some headway tonight, but first I need some pizza... and no, I don't need it from you, I have one in the oven.

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  • yay he's rewriting it!! finally no more small bits of updates all over the place yay!!!!!

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  • Well Skip, I know what you mean about not having time for anything else...I am in the same predicament. If you need to revamp your story that is fine by me. It it good so far, but if need the time to make it better go ahead...just next time don't take so long to tell us something. Keep us informed when you get the chance and I can't believe it's already been a year.

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  • AWESOME FANFIC. this is the best fanfic i have ever read. i've been reading all the posts, when you make a book out of this, i will definetly be on the buyers list. your story is soo incredibly awesome, i think i might write my own, it would fill up all the free time i seem to have when i procrastinate on my homework. [Edited on 11/21/2006]

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  • Hey what ever you want to do man im sure the rewrite will be even better. For how great the story is it can only get better as we go along well i hope all gose soothly for ya. Would have loved to see an up date thouh but I think we can wait.

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