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8/10/2005 10:45:16 PM
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The Forgotten Spartan

[i]For the record, this is a fanfiction story that [/i]I [i]wrote, it has no official connection to Bungie, it is merely my story.[/i] [b]PROLOGUE 0800 Hours, December 17, 2514(Military Calendar) /Epsilon Eridani System, planet Reach UNSC Priority Transmission 076452B-74 Encryption Code: Red Public Key: file/access Delta From: ONI Section Three To: Dr. Catherine Halsey M.D., Ph.D., Civilian Consultant (CIN: 10141-026-SRB4695) Subject: SPARTAN/Approval Classification: Restricted[/b] [i]/Start File/ Dr. Halsey, Project SPARTAN green lighted. SPARTAN I Augmentation To take place 10 years after this transmission. Any Recruit you Request Will Be Yours.[/i] [b]CHAPTER ONE 1700 Hours December 17, 2524 (Military Calendar) Epsilon Eridani System, ONI Medical Facility, in Orbit around Planet Reach[/b] The Cryopod doors opened, and Dr. Halsey walked into the room. The pods were lined up along the wall and various tubes connected to them. The Doctor’s heels clicked loudly on the tile floor as she walked towards the pods. The man in the pod on the left stumbled out and fell on his hands and knees. His physique was perfect, “good” she said to her self as she turned to face him. “Congratulations Lieutenant,” she said, “ You’re the only survivor.” The man started to choke and his hands slipped. He fell on his face and slipped into unconsciousness. [b]0800 Hours December 27,2524 (Military Calendar) Epsilon Eridani System, Hawthorne Medical Facility, Planet Reach[/b] First Lieutenant Matthew Simmons awoke on a hospital bed. His vision was blurred, but he could see that he was hooked up to several machines and I.V.s. outside the room’s window was DR. Halsey conversing with a Doctor, Simmons marveled at her intelligence, she was the reason he agreed to be in this program at all. The woman was brilliant, and there was something unexplainable that attracted Simmons to her. His thoughts were interrupted by Halsey’s entrance. “ How are you Lieutenant?” She asked. “Fine,” he replied, they both new this was a lie, Simmons was in immense pain, his bones ached, all his muscles seemed torn, and he could barely move. “ Of course you are,” she said mockingly, “ You have been given command of an ODST Platoon on Richter VII, I think you will enjoy it.” Simmons knew that would be trouble, ODSTs were the finest units the Marines had, and they didn’t take to kindly to fresh meat, either. But what had Halsey said, if he survived the Augmentation, which he did, he would be physically altered to have physical prowess to the likes of which he could not imagine. Being hardly able to move, though, was something he could imagine. “ You will make a full recovery within the week, then you will be transferred to Richter VII aboard the Destroyer Cherokee” Halsey told him. “ A week!” Simmons shouted, Halsey was not startled at all, “ I’m not waiting a week,” he told her, as he pulled the I.V.s from his arms, unconnected the machines, and stood up. “ I would really advise more rest,” Halsey told him. “ And I would really advise you stow it ma’am, I’m leaving.” “ Doctor’s orders,” she said Defiantly “ You’re a civilian, I am a Marine,” he told her as he strode out of the room “ You may be a marine,” Dr. Halsey said softly “ but more importantly you’re a Spartan.” [b]Chapter Two 0800 Hours January 3, 2525 (Military Calendar) Aboard UNSC Destroyer Cherokee en route to Richter VII[/b] Simmons had made a “full recovery” all right, could run over 50 KPH, and he had always been a slow runner before. He could also lift around eight hundred pounds. Everything seemed slow to him, too, like he was watching the world at half-speed. He marveled at his muscle mass and reflexes. He went to the gym aboard the Cherokee every day, went down to the section that was rotating at two Gs and would work out for hours. He also studied tactics and reviewed ancient battles; he would be ready to lead his platoon for sure. The only thing that bothered him about his new life was the fact that he was alone; he was the only survivor. His wished some of the others had survived. His best friend from the academy had been in the pod next to him, Dr. Halsey said the Augmentation went too fast, and his brain over loaded from all the change. She also said she was happy with the results. How? Nineteen men died, one survived, how were those good results? The Doctor must have had her reasons, she always did, but Simmons did not know what her reasons for this could have been, how had she helped humanity at all? Simmons pondered this for days, he refused to go into Cryo, and was therefore left with ten days to do nothing but think, work out and dread the day they would arrive at Richter VII. On the Day they were scheduled to arrive on Richter VII Simmons went to visit Major Sullivan, he was the executive officer of the Battalion of ODSTs stationed on the Cherokee. Sullivan had been a teacher at the Marine Academy At Quantico on Earth, and Taught Simmons for two years. Simmons wanted to ask him for advice on how to lead the hostile men in his charge; he wanted advice you couldn’t get in a book. As he took the elevator to the Major’s quarters he contemplated why the man had given up his teaching post for field duty, was he itching for combat, or sick of fresh officers asking him for advice on Marine life? He hoped it was the first one as he knocked on the Major’s door. “ Enter,” said a grizzly voice, Simmons remembered it as the Major’s. He opened the door and walked in. Sullivan had put in wood paneling and pictures of HEV pods dropping were hanging on the wall. It smelled of smoke, which was of course against regulations, but if anyone dared tell that to the Major, they would regret it during their Hospital stay. The Major’s voice wasn’t the only thing grizzly about him, he was 6’5, all muscle and looked as though he weighed three hundred pounds, At first Simmons felt threatened, then he remembered that he could lift Sullivan over his head and throw him through the door, and he straightened up. Sullivan was looking over a data pad, then looked up at Simmons, he had a scar streaking down his left cheek that was not there when he left Quantico, his once slick black hair now contained streaks of gray. He had aged a lot since he had been transferred to the Cherokee and made a dozen drops into rebel territory. “ Can I help you, Lieutenant?” He said, glancing over his data pad once more “ I hope so, Sir, I was hoping for advice on leadership now that I am going to lead a platoon of my own, Sir.” Sullivan dropped his data pad and got up from his desk, and walked around Simmons, surveying him, he stopped in front of him; he apparently liked what he saw. “ I’ve heard things about you Simmons, men say you can lift 800 pounds, that’s not human, what do you have to say about that?” “ Nothing, Sir,” Simmons knew that project SPARTAN was classified. “ So you admit it then?” the Major said inquisitively. “ I have changed since the academy, Sir” Simmons said hoping the Major would change subjects, he did. “ So you want advice, eh? Well I’ll tell you one thing Simmons, show them who boss, remind them it’s you, not their Sergeant, you, can you do that?” the Major asked him. “ Yes, Sir I can.” Simmons told him. “ Good, then you’re dismissed, Lieutenant” Simmons saluted Sullivan and exited the room. Show them who’s boss? This was the Marine Corps; his men should already know who’s boss. But Simmons made a note of the advice anyway, hoping he wouldn’t have to use it. Simmons packed his things into a duffel bag, and then slipped into his uniform. He placed his Standard Issue M6C Magnum in its holster, picked up his bag and walked to the hangar. The Cherokee would get in orbit around Richter VII and Simmons’ Pelican Drop ship would go down to the surface on its own. With the planet in such chaos with the recent rebel insurgency, Simmons thought this was a bad idea, one drop ship would be an easy target for rebel anti aircraft. [Edited on 07.09.2007 3:38 PM PDT]
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  • Poor poor spartin

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  • heres mine quick story srry about misspellin some words its late As Master chief gets jumps on the platform he becomes faced by a elite.He pulls out his Battle rifle 3 armor piercing round impact with the elites shield and the shield fades and fail Master chief fires 3 more rounds slicing thourgh the elites armor. Blue blood comes flying out of the elite and the elite drops. Master Chief then enters a room to the right. The door shuts and locks a second later hundreds of flood come out of the vents and maintince tunnles.John pulls out his smgs and gernades tosses the gernades greenish blood covers the wall as Master chief shoots his Smgs into the swarm of flood.He jumps over a small swarm and grabs on to a ledge and pulls himself up. He heads Through the door on the ledge and says over the Com "team Alpha this is Spartan 117 requsting imediate e-vac" "Spartan 117 e-vac comfermd what are your cordinates?"

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  • This thread is in severe need of bumpage.

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  • hey [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ahdinh2 wow I love it! more if you please! :)[/quote]

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  • Well heck yeah...I can't wait for the story to be done in its entirety. Any other news as of late?!? Sorry but I ain't had too much of a chance to get on the computer lately, but I will try a little more often.

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  • Plz plz plz don't give us updates, just focus on getting those revisions done!

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  • Aww im starting to drive my self stir crazy wating for the revise to be done. Can you give me some news on what chapeter your on plz plz plz sorry. Oh well its the hurry up and wait game for me.

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  • *whew* Some BIG progress today, and it's only noon right now. I have no school today, so it's all about the rewrite (and beating GRAW for the fourth time) some plot alterations were made (nothing major), some holes were filled, and one of the chapters that I barely remembered turned into my favorite chapter [i]ever[/i]. Surprisingly enough, it had no combat whatsoever, but I just loved the finished product when it came out; mystery and intrigue, man I loved it. I know it seems like I am teasing you, but I wanted to let you know that i had made progress today, so...

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  • Oh okay...well whatever works for the Skip then. Any new progress on the chapters?!?

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  • not really, It wasn't a very central plotline.

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  • Well that's good...as long as it fits into the story better and makes it run smoother...I'm down with the swap out...is the switch gonna be a surprise?!?

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  • It's been a little after the "holidays" so to speak, but I'm back. Rainman, you're making some pretty good progress with the story. Keep it up.

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  • Is any being added to it or just taken out?!?

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  • To be honest, the first chapter wasn't rewritten per se. It was just fleshed a tiny bit, nothing major, however, a lot of Chpt. 2 is being taken out.

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  • That ain't too bad, if you're re-doing the entire plot along with grammar...that's what I thought you was doing was rewriting the entire storyline. How long did it take to redo the first chapter...

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  • In actual rewriting (changing the plot, not just wording and grammar) I am on chapter two. It's almost done. (chapter two, not the story)

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  • Well Happy New Years to everyone...I'm late but you'll get over it...who is still talking about Spartans?!? I'm a little lost on why that topic keeps coming up for... Anyways, secrecy is only fun for the one keeping the secret....but if you can answer me one question Skip, how far into the rewrite are you?!?

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  • No rela news on the rewrite, but that doesn't mean nothing is happening. It just means I don't want to tell you what I have done right now. Sorry, secrecy is fun. On another note; I have created a new group, and would love for you all to join- [url=http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/112364/Group/GroupHome.aspx]Utopia Parkway[/url]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Spartan69139 Uhm.....I think Spartan 'I''s are the Spartan warriors of Sparta. If I remember correctly,'Fall of Reach' compared how the Spartan-II's were like the ancient warriors of Sparta. Also,if there was some 'Spartan-I cyborg',why wasn't there ever a mention of one in the Halo universe?[/quote] they were slightly. in the graphic novel, there are some reports, i wont spoil it, but, go read it

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  • So after you finish the rewrite up to the point where you left off, you'll start putting out new installments.

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  • Well for those who won't be back on 'til after Christmas I will talk to you next time and Skip how is the schedule looking for the break?!?

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  • Well this will be the last time im on the net for a while allmost read all of if i were your hero but still hopeing that skip will finish the rewrite soon. Would really love to read some more. But hey every idea throwen out means one less thing to ponder on. Merry christmas to all

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  • This'll probably be the last time I'm on the internet until next year, so happy holidays and good luck on rewriting.

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  • No, I don't think so. Anyway, some plot fleshing out took place yesterday. Nothing was decided, but several ideas were thrown out, so that's progress.

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  • sorry i havent been here in a while since we were told that no new chapters till after rewrite but have there been in the last month??

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