I liked it. My only feedback - I kind of got lost with the Ghost's feed and began to wonder what happened to the Inquisitors. I'd like to know more about the Guardian and the story, so I guess that's room for a next tale.
Cool work!
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Well I decided to go with an excerpt of Chapter Two because the first one where he first encounters the Inquisitors just seemed all jumbled to me so I think I need to rewrite it.