Good I like it. Being lost when they were young and being brought together is a good concept.
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Edited by Paradox1055: 11/23/2015 10:53:13 PMNext chapter Lives of ARC Initiations is out
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Thank you.
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Will you being doing a separate story explaining their time apart or anything? Who was brought back first or something?
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What? Oh, I didn't make that clear at all. They were revived that same year they died, but they spent five years apart training. One trained as a hunter the other trained as a warlock.
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OH! See I though this was like early age of humanity and then they were saved years later and trained! Misread that one lol.
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That's my fault. I didn't clear that up.
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Now that it's explained I see what you mean, but yea if you can add more to your post I'd maybe throw that in.
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Alright.