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Edited by Thank you Commander: 10/8/2015 3:27:12 AM
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Guardians i am in need of a good title for my new book.

: Shattering lights I stood there born out of nothing, I saw this immovable force, so hateful or is it? I mean it was all alone, for eons it existed by itself, having no purpose or reason. But to consume all there is. Then it noticed me after a few Eons and it chased me all over, I saw things I saw how empty and void this place was. It was all strange to me. I learned to mask my power level. I don’t think there is any other living thing besides this force that is as strong as me. Why am I even alive? Or am I even alive to begin with? I don’t really know all I do know is that this thing doesn’t accept me being here. It doesn’t want me here. It feels nothing but hate, what do I feel? I cannot say exactly what I feel right now. There is nothing but pitch blackness here. Is this what it means to be shrouded in utter darkness? What must I do to escape it? Whatever this force is, she doesn’t want me to leave, it seems she is trying to simulate me to make a part of her, does she fear me or is it simply a hunger for what I consider the light? I feel another presence here, its crying out to me to help save it to beat back whatever this force is, it’s a females voice telling me to fight back or I will be consumed and brought into nonexistence and the reason it’s after me is because I became far too powerful for it to just simply let me go unwarranted. I cannot seem to remember how I actually came to be just that I just appeared and I don’t even have a name but whatever this thing is it doesn’t care about me. It only wants my power. Well I cannot just let it take me why do I feel the need to fight whatever this is for survival. “You are my light I gave birth to you, and you are just as it is and what it will be again, I took its power and copied it to make you, I am not strong enough to help but I can tell of its origins and the ruin it laid at my feet. But only if you will listen to what I have to say?” Tell me all there is and don’t spare no accounts for my sake. I need to know the power this thing wields if I am to beat it. “Long ago there was Light and it was beautiful and I and my sister made life out of that light. I was however more powerful then she was, over time the things I made she would care for and protect it, then something happened to her, she began to resent me and it changed her heart, her feelings of old became something dark and crazy. She claimed that I was out for myself and that I was making too much life and taking credit for it. However I tried to convince her that wasn’t the case, which it was both of us that made all this light and life. She refused to listen to reason and declared that all life and light I made she would swallow and leave Darkness and bone in its place. I couldn’t bear to see my precious work undone because she was felt jealously and hate. But I also loved my sister more than anything. So we choose a place to settle the score she devoured so much light, so much life and it hurt me but I had to make a choice to stop her, to end my beloved elder sister that we nearly killed each other and brought the end of this once beautiful realm. She was far more powerful than I thought she would be, she defeated and wiped out all I made and she fled the battlefield and started to consume all life I made and I couldn’t do a thing but hide and heal but I realized that I wasn’t getting better I was dying. I was scared and I cried till I came up with you. You are my one and only son and you will carry my will on, she fears you because you hold the light I was born with, she knows how powerful you are and that she has limited time here and that you will win, you are my last Hope the last Light that will shine through her Darkness, please save my beloved sister for me, ending her is the only way to free her from this sickness she has. But one last thing my dear son, I am sorry I am leaving you alone to fight her, but I am almost out of time. Know I do love you and I hope you don’t become as she was, that you become so pure that only light emanates off of you. My son don’t forget me my name was Laurea Prima I was the youngest of my siblings and I failed once but I feel I can be forgiven for bringing you the Realms Savior. Go forth and bring light back to this realm and others. Save it before it is too late. My son Emmanuel. I will Love you Always!” so all of this was you’re doing going against mother and the light and leaving the world in darkness I will not allow anymore of this. My Aunt this is the end of your terror. Feel my wrath for my mother’s loss. Her light shines brightest through me. For Eons they battled one another, they scarred the realms of old, The Light against The Darkness the greatest battle ensued for Eons more and it seemed as if I wasn’t ever going to win, till I got away and planned a comeback. Then I made life like my mother once did. I made him my friend who was given much Authority by my hand. His name would later be known as Death. The one who guides the lost souls of past lives towards peace. His light too was strong and through battling alongside me became just as strong. We both decided that more light was needed to beat her and end her destruction. So I did just that and I made the Celestial beings that would be known as my agents of light. Together we fought the Darkness and we beat it back. But I could not end it entirely I realized that my mother’s sister has been dead for some time and all of that light she devoured and turned into Darkness took her over and eventually killed her. She wasn’t alive nor was she dead, it was as if she never existed to begin with. So we locked it away bound by lock and key. I entrusted this lock and key to my most promising agent Lucifer to guard it and protect it so that the light that is being shown would not be endangered ever again. This is the beginning of the tale of my return. The Light, the Darkness, Good and Evil. I became a fable my mother’s legend a myth, the Darkness a bed time story and a lore. I went into hiding after the events of my favorite Angels Corruption I did not know that the lock and key would still hold such influence and the Darkness within corrupted him and he fell and became just as my mother’s sister had. So I too locked him away in a cage to protect my mother’s last light. That last light was Humans sure I made thousands of worlds that I left in a Golden Age, but none of them could compare to Humans who took on the form of both my mother’s light and my Aunts Corruption. If you humans can ever translate this and learn from it just know one thing. Follow the light and lead against Evil. I have opened a wound and I am leaving this Universe that I made by my hand. Death is asleep and Lucifer is sealed away in his cage and I am leaving the agents of Light to protect this Universe and to protect you. I will return one day. Till then my sons and daughters and my mother’s legacy live on and flourish. End of the bed time story my beloved son. It is time to sleep and rest that light of yours. Oh momma but why so early? None of my other friends go to bed this early. Well son it’s because they don’t have a light like ours now do they. So get some rest my little Sammy she smiled as he tucked him in and placed his necklace near his night stand. Peace has lived on since the battle of old. But it will all be undone one day, that day is coming. All life will tremble at the will of the Darkness. …. It’s… coming… pray. give me your thoughts on this draft/Prologue and it is still in work so I need to finish proof reading this. so bear with me. but I need a title Shattering Lights is just a place holder for now.

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