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MLG Cheehwawa's ** Halo REACH script ** (+REACH 2 preview!)

[b]Halo: REACH[/b] [i]by MLG Cheehwawa[/i] [b]*** // [u]PLEASE POST YOUR THOUGHTS TO KEEP THIS THREAD ALIVE. A LOT OF WORK WENT INTO IMAGINING, RESEARCHING, WRITING, AND EDITING THIS... ALL DONE BY ME. THANKS![/u] \\ ***[/b] [b]** [i]Moderator-approved[/i] **[/b] [b][u]DISCLAIMERS[/b][/u] [i]This is entirely my creation (I have borrowed lines directly from some novels to tie this in with the existing canon); I have no affiliation with Bungie studios and do not claim to know what Halo REACH will be about. This is my idea for what REACH would be like [b]if[/b] I were the writer on the project. A lot of this has been crafted by me, and not taken directly from the Halo canon (namely characters, locations, battles, and ships), but to the best of my knowledge, it does not conflict with the canon at all. If it does, let me know so I can tweak it.[/i] [b]The numbering question:[/b] [i]Sierra-259 and Sierra-320 have call-signs above 150, the original number of Spartan-II candidates. My explanation for this is that there was a large pool of children surveyed (at least 320). Then of those, 150 of the best were selected, and of those, only 75 were conscripted due to budget limitations.[/i] The script is all complete and posted. This is definitely not the end of the story, though. I have designed this to be a trilogy of games. I'm working on the first sequal now, which will run parallel with the beginning of Halo 2 and some of Ghosts of Onyx, but it will be a new story like with my first script. Halo REACH 2 will show us numerous things which Bungie hasn't told us about, that you will find out as I post. I don't know how fast I will be able to get the sequal done, though I already have the backbone for the first and second sequals, as well as the [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589354]first cinematic[/url] (Harbinger), as well as about half of the first mission, for REACH 2. I'm starting at a full time job tomorrow and another semester at college late this month. I will get this done as fast as possible. [b]IF YOU DO NOT WANT MY STORY SPOILED, I SUGGEST YOU AVOID THE BESTIARUM AND DRAMATIS PERSONAE UNTIL SOMETHING IN THE STORY CONFUSES YOU.[/b] Otherwise you may know how the story ends before you even begin. [b]I write this for three reasons:[/b] [b]1.[/b] Because I love the Halo Universe. [b]2.[/b] I am the writer for a small game developing studio. This is good practice for my current and future work. [b]3.[/b] To share my story; a lot of effort went into this, so please give it a read and leave some feedback if you have the time. [i]I hope you enjoy this piece as much as I enjoyed researching and writing it.[/i] [b][u]Halo REACH[/b][/u][quote] [b]0: [u]Introduction[/b][/u] ([i]this![/i]) [b]I: [u]Dramatis personae[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693067]Part 1[/url]) [b]II: [u]Bestiarum[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693087]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693155]Part 2[/url]) [b]III: [u]The Pillar of Autumn[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693221]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693234]Part 2[/url]) [b]IV: [u]Reach[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33694166]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33694189]Part 2[/url]) [b]V: [u]The Grid[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33722631]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33722679]Part 2[/url]) [b]VI: [u]The Divine Retribution[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823721]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823737]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823770]Part 3[/url]) [b]VII: [u]Camp Independence[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883434]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883449]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883459]Part 3[/url]) [b]VIII: [u]Ruins[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939360]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939382]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939415]Part 3[/url]) [b]IX: [u]Graves[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954239]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954252]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954269]Part 3[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954281]Part 4[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954297]Part 5[/url]) [b]X: [u]Asterion[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33966708]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33966723]Part 2[/url]) [b]XI: [u]Pathways[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33967345]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33968437]Part 2[/url]) [b]XII: [u]Revalation[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986238]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986267]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986285]Part 3[/url]) [b]XIII: [u]Ghosts of Reach[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33991656]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33992667]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33992722]Part 3[/url]) [b]XIV: [u]Credits[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693275]Part 1[/url]) [b]XV: [u]Legendary Ending[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33999918]Part 1[/url]) [/quote] [b][u]Halo REACH 2[/u] (preview)[/b][quote] [b]Harbinger:[/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589354]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589441]Part 2[/url]) [b]Notes[/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=36475503]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=36475530]Part 2[/url]) [Edited on 08.30.2009 6:52 PM PDT]
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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Jericho VI couldn't be any of that hog-wash. the Spartan III's couldn't have existed becuase they were all at onyx. your whole plot just went down the drain.[/quote]If you read GoO you would have picked up the fact that they were all gone from Onyx around October 20, according to Fred. We never learn where the 215 S-IIIs of Gamma went in the novels, so I used them in my script. After they left Onyx on October 20 (check the dates in my REACH 2 notes) they were to launch an assault against the mobile Covenant base which was gathering ships in preparation for a massive assault on Earth. Just so happens that the Civil War broke out on and around said Covenant base, making it possible for the S-IIIs, with a little help from out 5 S-IIs, to stop the invasive forces in their tracks... for now. And then they head back to Sol ASAP to spread the news of the Civil War as well as defend the planet. I thought this all out, trust me. In REACH 3 the first planet to be assaulted was Mars. In the Bungie timeline the Forerunner Dreadnaught is in the Sol system for something like a week before heading to Earth (beginning of H3/end of H2), so I made the reasoning behind this an artifact on Mars - something worth fighting for even in this late hour... according to the Fleetmaster's intel from Onyx just before getting blown to bits by Kurt. In REACH 3 the Gammas (S-IIIs) die defending the entrance to said structure, a second entrance to the Shield World from Ghosts of Onyx, while the S-IIs (as well as a portion of the Brute, Elite, and Human fleets) enter and fight in the alien lands. They eventually find out that they are trapped in here forever, and GUARDIAN aids them in disrupting the slipspace generator (remember in GoO the dyson sphere was not actually at Onyx, but it existed within slipspace - Onyx just had an entrance to the world, like Mars in my story), dropping the planet out of slipspace. At the end of the game, they are marching up a mountain and in the distance sillhouettes appear. We never see them up close, but they are: Fred, Kelly, Linda, etc. from GoO. A familar voice, Fred, whispers "Oly Oly Oxen Free" over COM before cutting to black. In the Legendary Ending, the Spartans approach each other and briefly discuss what happened to them, before GUARDIAN interrupts them loudly informing them of a nearby slipspace rupture. They ask "Friend or Foe?" He replies simply: Reclaimer. (ends up it's the Master Chief from the Legendary end of Halo 3, setting us up for more story in the form of games, books, movies, comics, whatever, with the Spartans re-united as a squad again)

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  • couldn't be any of that hog-wash. the Spartan III's couldn't have existed becuase they were all at onyx. your whole plot just went down the drain.

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  • halo rulz! cant wait

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  • This was amazing. Bungie should defiantly use components of it.

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  • Excellent script Cheehwawa, I really enjoyed reading it, much better than the Cole Protocol. And when are you going to post more of the Reach 2 script?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] thatguyaknow How do you know all this stuff?[/quote]I made it up. [/quote]Best reply ever.

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  • These are cool, you definitely have a talent for creative writing

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  • I kind of wish Raum didnt die. He and Xytan were my favorite characters

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  • Join it.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sealim [url]http://www.halocrusades.com?x=1540[/url] Awesomesauce.[/quote] online currently 117 hmmm coincidence i think not

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  • [url]http://www.halocrusades.com?x=1540[/url] Awesomesauce.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Your MOM is MC [quote][b]Halo 3: ODST ViDoc [u][i]"Dramatis Personae"[/i][/u][/b][/quote] Hmm, I wonder where THAT came from? [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [b]I: [u]Dramatis personae[/b][/u] [/quote][/quote]I wonder if Bungie borrowed it because I used it in this script?

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  • Great Job man!!!

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  • [quote][b]Halo 3: ODST ViDoc [u][i]"Dramatis Personae"[/i][/u][/b][/quote] Hmm, I wonder where THAT came from? [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [b]I: [u]Dramatis personae[/b][/u] [/quote]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa Oh, I gotcha :) Well I actually got the idea for the Forerunner city from Ghosts of Onyx... there was an underground Forerunner "city" there.[/quote] Oh ya, frankly, now that you brought that up I can understand. Maybe Reach could have been a shield world too if there was a Forerunner city on it? Hmm... Do I smell a return to the glassed planet?

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  • Good stuff I like the Elite charchter. Xytans brother haha. Thats a good idea. [Edited on 10.18.2009 6:25 PM PDT]

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  • Dang. Looks like you put effort into this. I like it. Kudos!

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  • Oh, I gotcha :) Well I actually got the idea for the Forerunner city from Ghosts of Onyx... there was an underground Forerunner "city" there.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa Glad you enjoyed it =) Just curious, why did you say Dis makes this go against the canon?[/quote] Oh nono lol! I didn't mean that Dis went against the cannon, it just didn't seem like an intact Forerunner city would exist. But seeing as it was within Reach, I guess it does kinda make sense seeing as Reach is near Earth and the Flood didn't make it that far. So ya it just didn't seem like something that would fit I mean, it didn't go against anything it just seemed outta place as all. But ya, you did a very good job and it was a great read!

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  • Wow, that story was great!

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  • Suprised. It's fan fiction, but you obviously seem to know the characters well. I didn't read the whole thing so I didn't know if you developed the plot well, but the whole keyes saying " they're human" and that whole part definately seemed in character. Good job. I think.

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  • let the post die down and destory all his hard work go a way HAHAHAH no more posts [Edited on 10.18.2009 12:43 PM PDT]

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  • Glad you enjoyed it =) Just curious, why did you say Dis makes this go against the canon?

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  • Hehe, I literally spent all my time awake today in one full sitting reading the whole entire thing and the beginning of Reach 2. Very nice and thorough game plan although seems like the cannon would go in lines with Halo Wars's style. Not just because of the inclusion of the Flood, that was very strategic actually ;), but because of Dis and there were some minor plot inconsitences and playability issues as well like the fact that you barely ever get to use a human weapon but I guess you find dead human corpses with them along the way so maybe you could use that as a back up but overall I'd say spending my day reading this was pretty well worth it! The Legendary Ending was pretty interesting as well but I'm liking Halo: Reach 2's story already much more than the first! Overall, this is true Halo fan-fiction at it's best!

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  • I have a massive hangover, reading this now :)

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  • Wow. This is tight. I hope Bungie takes some of your ideas and uses them. -Dom-

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