[b]Halo: REACH[/b]
[i]by MLG Cheehwawa[/i]
[b]*** // [u]PLEASE POST YOUR THOUGHTS TO KEEP THIS THREAD ALIVE. A LOT OF WORK WENT INTO IMAGINING, RESEARCHING, WRITING, AND EDITING THIS... ALL DONE BY ME. THANKS![/u] \\ ***[/b]
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[b][u]DISCLAIMERS[/b][/u]
[i]This is entirely my creation (I have borrowed lines directly from some novels to tie this in with the existing canon); I have no affiliation with Bungie studios and do not claim to know what Halo REACH will be about. This is my idea for what REACH would be like [b]if[/b] I were the writer on the project. A lot of this has been crafted by me, and not taken directly from the Halo canon (namely characters, locations, battles, and ships), but to the best of my knowledge, it does not conflict with the canon at all. If it does, let me know so I can tweak it.[/i]
[b]The numbering question:[/b] [i]Sierra-259 and Sierra-320 have call-signs above 150, the original number of Spartan-II candidates. My explanation for this is that there was a large pool of children surveyed (at least 320). Then of those, 150 of the best were selected, and of those, only 75 were conscripted due to budget limitations.[/i]
The script is all complete and posted. This is definitely not the end of the story, though. I have designed this to be a trilogy of games. I'm working on the first sequal now, which will run parallel with the beginning of Halo 2 and some of Ghosts of Onyx, but it will be a new story like with my first script.
Halo REACH 2 will show us numerous things which Bungie hasn't told us about, that you will find out as I post. I don't know how fast I will be able to get the sequal done, though I already have the backbone for the first and second sequals, as well as the [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589354]first cinematic[/url] (Harbinger), as well as about half of the first mission, for REACH 2. I'm starting at a full time job tomorrow and another semester at college late this month. I will get this done as fast as possible.
[b]IF YOU DO NOT WANT MY STORY SPOILED, I SUGGEST YOU AVOID THE BESTIARUM AND DRAMATIS PERSONAE UNTIL SOMETHING IN THE STORY CONFUSES YOU.[/b] Otherwise you may know how the story ends before you even begin.
[b]I write this for three reasons:[/b]
[b]1.[/b] Because I love the Halo Universe. [b]2.[/b] I am the writer for a small game developing studio. This is good practice for my current and future work. [b]3.[/b] To share my story; a lot of effort went into this, so please give it a read and leave some feedback if you have the time.
[i]I hope you enjoy this piece as much as I enjoyed researching and writing it.[/i]
[b][u]Halo REACH[/b][/u][quote]
[b]0: [u]Introduction[/b][/u] ([i]this![/i])
[b]I: [u]Dramatis personae[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693067]Part 1[/url])
[b]II: [u]Bestiarum[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693087]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693155]Part 2[/url])
[b]III: [u]The Pillar of Autumn[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693221]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693234]Part 2[/url])
[b]IV: [u]Reach[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33694166]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33694189]Part 2[/url])
[b]V: [u]The Grid[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33722631]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33722679]Part 2[/url])
[b]VI: [u]The Divine Retribution[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823721]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823737]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33823770]Part 3[/url])
[b]VII: [u]Camp Independence[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883434]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883449]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33883459]Part 3[/url])
[b]VIII: [u]Ruins[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939360]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939382]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33939415]Part 3[/url])
[b]IX: [u]Graves[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954239]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954252]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954269]Part 3[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954281]Part 4[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33954297]Part 5[/url])
[b]X: [u]Asterion[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33966708]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33966723]Part 2[/url])
[b]XI: [u]Pathways[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33967345]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33968437]Part 2[/url])
[b]XII: [u]Revalation[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986238]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986267]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33986285]Part 3[/url])
[b]XIII: [u]Ghosts of Reach[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33991656]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33992667]Part 2[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33992722]Part 3[/url])
[b]XIV: [u]Credits[/b][/u] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693275]Part 1[/url])
[b]XV: [u]Legendary Ending[/u][/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33999918]Part 1[/url])
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[b][u]Halo REACH 2[/u] (preview)[/b][quote]
[b]Harbinger:[/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589354]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35589441]Part 2[/url])
[b]Notes[/b] ([url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=36475503]Part 1[/url] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=36475530]Part 2[/url])
[Edited on 08.30.2009 6:52 PM PDT]
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sorry but good story but halo is halo, made by bungie, they wont do that.
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Please take a step outside and stay outside Cheehwawa
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Great Story!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] billbobaggins http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/335142/Group/GroupHome.aspx this is a site go to it become a member and if we have enough member in on this bungie will upgrade forge for us so come on we might be able to have placeable AI in forge please guys we need this thank you!!!!! spread the news around please[/quote] Quit spamming and gtfo
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http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/335142/Group/GroupHome.aspx this is a site go to it become a member and if we have enough member in on this bungie will upgrade forge for us so come on we might be able to have placeable AI in forge please guys we need this thank you!!!!! spread the news around please
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http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/335142/Group/GroupHome.aspx this is a site go to it become a member and if we have enough member in on this bungie will upgrade forge for us so come on we might be able to have placeable AI in forge please guys we need this thank you!!!!! spread the news around please
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Ok I skipped a few pages. Now I got to say this. Although it's awesome, if you read Halo: Evolutions, Spartan-066 is already taken, the name being "Soren". Unfortunately he was washed out of the program (However he was not physically unfit) and was last known to be theorize, into escaping into a forest.
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Good read I have a mission I always hoped would be happen in Halo 3 but it didn't happen. I wanted to have and evnviroment to the swamps in 343 guilty spark in Halo 1 with similar fog and rainy weather conditions in a dark damp swamp. I lioves how thick the foliage was and the forest/jungle setting leading up to the ambush area where you enter the forruner structure and then at the end of the mission when you make the desperate push with the marines to the rally point. Then while you are making your way there you are ambushed by flood and Id like if this senario happened In Halo Reach but with a convoy of vehicles on a road and you get ambushed by Covenant forces. I just want a dark foggy ambush in a forest lol.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] thedarktsla i read through most of it and those are pretty much the books like the jump the only thign you change was the guy grabbing the sniper rifle and like a few words in the entire thing dude.[/quote]I kept the beginning the same as the novels to give it some grounding. To integrate it into the existing canon. You OBVIOUSLY didn't read most of it, as the story after they get to the generators is entirely new, but also based off of some theories so that it could potentially be fit into the canon.
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Reported for bumping.
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i read through most of it and those are pretty much the books like the jump the only thign you change was the guy grabbing the sniper rifle and like a few words in the entire thing dude.
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All I can is wow. Good stuff, MLG Chee. I admit, I have no time to read it, as I am so busy with my own work... But you've been a big part of this community and showing your love for the Halo Universe is always a plus in my book. +10 Sniper ammo for the win! :)
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Win ;p
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] SteroidKloud why dont u work at bungie your briliant :) u should sign up right now. [/quote]I'm actually Writing for [url=http://www.susurration.net/]Whisper Studios[/url] now and about to start on the script for one of our Projects, [i]Heron[/i]. But thanks for the compliment :) [Edited on 01.11.2010 8:07 AM PST]
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why dont u work at bungie your briliant :) u should sign up right now.
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wow..LARGEST WALL OF TEXT EVER....
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Wow, I would never have had the patience to do something like this. Congrats. This is the Only way I'd alter it, in a rickroll sort of fashion. On the super secret legendary ending, it plays the scene from 2001: a Space Odyssey where Hal says "will I dream, Dave?" With a Bungie twist of course.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ERRxxKILLA117 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b][u]BESTIARUM[/u][/b] ([b]Part 1[/b] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693155]Part 2[/url])[/quote][i]What lies within.[/i] [b]Mark II:[/b] The most effective warriors of the Insurrectionists are former marines in the UNSC; they became insurrectionists to try and "liberate" colony-civilizations, wanting to be independent societies. Their name is ironic; the [i]Innies[/i] want out. The Mark IIs wear [url=http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Mjolnir#Mark_II_Prototype]MJOLNIR Mark II[/url].[/quote] Actually this is impossible because the only person that can wear a MJOLNIR Mark II suit is a spartan because as it has been said in the Halo novel, [i] Halo: Fall of Reach[/i], they did a test on a marine wearing the armour, and when he moved his arm, he completely broke his bone, which made him move the rest of his body parts and broke just about every single bone in his body, and he died. This is because the MJOLNIR suits move to fast and strong( this is why spartans wear them, because they have virtually unbreakable bones). But I like your ideas though.[/quote]No, that was the MJOLNIR [b]Mk IV[/b]. The Mk I, II, and III were ditched for combat purposes and used in Heavy Lifting situations (like loading space stations I would assume). The trainers used an old variant of MJOLNIR (either I or II) against the Spartan children in a cave on Reach after they were augmented while Halsey recorded it (from TFoR).
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AWESOME!!!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b][u]BESTIARUM[/u][/b] ([b]Part 1[/b] ll [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=33693155]Part 2[/url])[/quote][i]What lies within.[/i] [b]Mark II:[/b] The most effective warriors of the Insurrectionists are former marines in the UNSC; they became insurrectionists to try and "liberate" colony-civilizations, wanting to be independent societies. Their name is ironic; the [i]Innies[/i] want out. The Mark IIs wear [url=http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Mjolnir#Mark_II_Prototype]MJOLNIR Mark II[/url].[/quote] Actually this is impossible because the only person that can wear a MJOLNIR Mark II suit is a spartan because as it has been said in the Halo novel, [i] Halo: Fall of Reach[/i], they did a test on a marine wearing the armour, and when he moved his arm, he completely broke his bone, which made him move the rest of his body parts and broke just about every single bone in his body, and he died. This is because the MJOLNIR suits move to fast and strong( this is why spartans wear them, because they have virtually unbreakable bones). But I like your ideas though.
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gosh i just jizzed in my pants. BTW thats awsome, you need to hop on the bungie bandwagon
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that....was effng great u should really consider becoming a writer for bungie
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] echo33 sgt. jace: hey nick, get that cannon locked up, rook, get your ammo, and hop your ass into a seat, now! pvt. carpenter: ok sir artie. is locked down tight, now we just sit down and....( hangar bay rumbles)...what the hell was that!!! Sgt. jace: hell if i know, lets roll. (albatross packs up and flys out of hangar) [/quote] Sergeant Jace holds an instance likeness to the big avery johnston. put his voice in his parts.
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I just finshed reading the whole thing in one sitting! Nice ending! :o You did an amazing job and i cant wait for the debut tonight!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MLG Cheehwawa [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Peruvian friend Less than 3 it! <3[/quote]?[/quote] he loves it. <3 makes a love heart shape.